Xuanhuan Script: The Exquisite Empress Calls Me Her Traitorous Disciple

The novel is very good, but it lacks a little bit of help, the author💪. There is no level 999 like other system texts, and there is no such thing as unlimited traffic! It looks like a real fantasy novel, but it has more life scripts than the pig's feet in other fantasy novels, which makes the originally mediocre protagonist have more capital than the protagonist... I just don't know when the protagonist can erase the word "die in infancy" haha ​​😄

Come on, you can also arrange an awesome fairy master for the protagonist, Chongshi ~ [laughing evilly] [laughing evilly] [laughing evilly]. This novel is no longer readable. There are all kinds of brainless manipulations. Women are so crazy about chasing after them. I write emotional scenes every day. It's not that I'm not allowed to write emotional scenes, but you went too far. You used the reputation of emotional dramas to write articles, and the emotional scenes are also particularly poorly written. The gap between the writing style is too big. I wonder if someone has changed. Alas, I quit the book, so I can take care of myself [rolls eyes] [rolls eyes] [rolls eyes] [rolls eyes]

This is one of the better books I have read in this category. There are just too many female protagonists, resulting in some female protagonists having too few roles. I hope the author will thank some of the previous female protagonists for their storylines.

Anyone who reads this book and gives me likes is Dashuai Biye |ω)

Overall, this book is okay, but it might be better if I add some emotion or a combination of elements later to enrich the scene (I hope the author will reply to me)

The writing is good, I personally think it is very exciting, that is, Pan Shu's wool is not wasted. People who have ill intentions towards the protagonist will rob him when the opportunity arises. People who are kind to the protagonist will not say help, but there is no need to fight when the opportunity arises. There are some opportunities where the protagonist doesn't need to give them away as a favor, and that's okay too.

The harem stories written by the author are pretty good among the novels I have read. The most important thing is that no girls are left out or girls are given away. And so far, the harems that have been accepted in the past have more or less plots in the subsequent articles, unlike other authors who wrote that after the girls are taken in, they just disappear from the world. Hope the author can keep it up!

Keep up the good work, it's very interesting. Judging from my knowledge of reading thousands of books, it's very good and very promising.

The character of the protagonist is good, but there is nothing like that: he is in the air every second, complains about the system, and always brings his brain with him when he goes out. The plot is also good, the only shortcoming is that the update is not fast enough... I hope the author can make the protagonist integrate all the methods and achieve the supreme level of swordsmanship. (There is nothing that cannot be solved with one sword. If there is, then use two swords) The main character was pretty good without being apprenticed to a master, but the plot changed when he was apprenticed to a beautiful master...

Five-star praise! The author writes really well! Better than those authors with low word count! The subject matter is novel. Well, the protagonist has too many sisters, and each of them is the reincarnation of the empress. The author is really imaginative! I hope the comment can be seen by the author! By the way, I wonder if you can choose my character. His name is Ling Tian! Hope the character gets chosen! Because I am poor and have no money, I can only watch videos to support the author...