Cultivation: I Can See the Script of My Life

I agree with your book, but I think your outline needs to be improved, and you should add a line about slow-burning in the introduction. Well, I'm not against harems, just don't say too much. The reason is that too many words in the later period will always leak out, giving people the feeling that you have forgotten the protagonist woman. Judging from the content, the author has summarized the shortcomings of life scripts and did not write the protagonist who is supposed to be a supporting role into the same experience as the protagonist. Of course, I think you can transform Tiandao Niang into the protagonist. Let me add: Tiandao looks at his own destiny: cultivation The Son of Heaven was defeated by the alien evil god, and the world was swallowed up and destroyed by Heaven. One day, he saw the fate of the protagonist in his previous life, and he had an idea to recruit the protagonist and fabricate the system (after all, the origin of many systems is difficult to deal with, and the system written by the author is really not very functional. ) Gives the protagonist a chance to grow, and continuously shapes and upgrades the system to absorb the original feedback of the small world. The way of heaven: the way of heaven after changing the destiny: transforming into a person of destiny, following Su Yun and marrying him, and working together with the protagonist to defeat the alien evil god and devour his origin to advance to one of the top worlds. To be honest, slow-burning genres are really not popular nowadays, and I rarely read slow-burning genres, but your book is indeed well-written and is the best of its kind. Except for slow-burning, everything else is good. Emmm, don't arrange any forced marriages between sisters. Just scenes where the protagonist comes to the rescue or the sister's family makes things difficult for her in every possible way.

I let go, but not yet; I recovered, but not yet healed; I thought about it, but still miss it; I forgot, but still have memories. With the help of five stars, I hope you can write quickly and there will be no unfinished work. This book is not an invincible article, just like ordinary people, but it has some brilliance and can be read and read. Disadvantages: slow to warm up. Big disadvantage: too slow to warm up. Biggest disadvantage: too slow to warm up. Now my desire to watch it is very small. After all, it is not even as good as the "supporting characters" now. Moreover, it is too girly, acting as if the protagonist is not the main character, and is a bit out of the scope of what boys can watch, as if it is out of the male channel and anti-female channel. The disadvantages are not many, but they are big. The more I watch it, the less interesting it becomes. The protagonist is just like a supporting character. There is nothing interesting about it. I won't say that it is slow, but it is still a slave girl. Now that I have Yang Linggen, I am not saying that I am a waste, but I just don't write the protagonist. It feels like: Oh, I am just playing, and I won't write whatever you want to see. If this is still the case tomorrow, I think there is no need to read this book.

The more you look at it, the better it looks. Isn't it pretty? But when you see twenty or thirty pictures, they feel particularly beautiful. Don't worry, your rating won't go up. It should reach 9.0 When you have more than 100 photos.

I have been pursuing this book for a while. I feel that this book is quite good and worth reading. If someone is in a book shortage, reading this book is also a good choice.

The author's writing is very good. I like this calm feeling. Is it possible to arrange a good opportunity for the protagonist? This way of writing is more exciting. Otherwise, he will always be lower than others in cultivation. If you listen to it for a long time, you will feel uncomfortable.

It's quite good. I finished it in one go, but it's too short. 😂 I hope the author will update it soon.

I haven't seen this kind of plot before, it's so interesting.

The plot is quite interesting. It's different from the traditional routine. I like to stay in one place.

I gave it four stars because of TJ. In fact, this book is the only normal one among so many fast-food novels (villain, invincible, harem...) That I can take the trouble to read. I'll give it four stars at most because of tj. This is the only drawback.

Fortunately, some of the settings are not very good, and there are a few toxic points, but they are not unbearable. And no matter how I look at it, it seems to be a bit unfinished. Maybe it is really unfinished, or it may be my misunderstanding. It may also be that the author did not outline it well and it will be difficult to write later. Overall, this book is still recommended.