On the Brink of Honkai Impact 3rd

Name: On the Brink of Honkai Impact 3rd
Author: It's Amo, Yeah

崩坏之际

by It's Amo, Yeah (是阿墨哟—)

Status: Completed
Length: 3.4M Words
Genre: Anime Fanfiction
Updated: 1mo ago
English: Request a translation

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Synopsis

PS: This story begins in the Previous Era and has now reached the Current Era.

Please note: this novel has no romance, features a female protagonist, and has two female leads.

A slow burn, with mostly slice-of-life scenes and storytelling, and relatively little combat.

“The dark, dark sky hangs low

Bright, bright stars follow along...”

“Do you remember? This is the song you sang to me when we first met.”

“Back then, I was weak and helpless, and afraid of everything around me.”

“You took my hand and led me out of the darkness, one step at a time.”

“From that moment on, a shadow was left in my heart, a pink shadow.”

“And the one who cast that shadow was you, Elysia.”

“When I was little and afraid of the dark, you would hold me at night and hum me a lullaby.”

“When I was little and afraid of getting hurt, you covered all the sharp corners at home with soft foam.”

“I was afraid of being abandoned, so over and over again, you patiently told me, ‘Xiao Ling, you're my precious girl.’”

“Even today, I still remember every little moment of our life together. I still remember all those happy times.”

“I loved coming home and saying to you, ‘Elysia, I'm home.’ And you would answer, ‘Xiao Ling, welcome home.’”

“I wish I could say that to you one more time.”

“But what a shame, Elysia. I can no longer welcome you home.”

“If I could, I would love to hear you say my name one more time, to call me...”

“Xiao Ling.”

“...At the very end, I want to say...

Elysia, welcome home.”

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5.5kReads · 30 days

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628Shelf adds, last 14 days

9.6Score

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This is the journey of heroes chasing fire, the story of Fu Ling, a beautiful, blossoming maiden's life in a world of trees and sea, from birth to growth to maturity. The story is filled with joy and sorrow; it is no longer just a story, but the reality of a young girl. Therefore, pure and noble soul, may your future shine like gold, unburdened by the past, unwavering in your path. May you remain as you were at first sight.
217 likes4y ago
I feel this book is the pinnacle of Honkai Impact 3rd fanfiction. The author's character development is superb. After reading the first volume, I truly felt a deep connection to the characters; it was incredibly painful. It's like being stabbed by miHoYo's writing and then by the author's own. I really love this book and hope the author continues to update and give Fu Cen a happy ending! 👍
152 likes3y ago
Overall, this is the best Honkai Impact fanfiction I've ever read. Even so, I ultimately decided to stop reading after the previous civilization ended (although I couldn't resist reading a bit of the sequel). I genuinely cried when Alicia died, but I felt that Fuling's life in the previous civilization had come to an end. Here, I sincerely wish the author continued success and that their writing gets better and better. (I'll be back when it's finished!)
133 likes3y ago
I'm following this book on both of my accounts, and it's truly excellent. It's one of the best Honkai Impact 3rd fanfics I've ever encountered. This is my secondary account, so I don't have many books on my shelf, but my main account seems to have hundreds. By the way, is there any Miss Alicia willing to adopt me? Females only, please. Please ignore my previous comment; looking back at it a year later, it's really embarrassing.
106 likes4y ago
It looks so good (in my opinion). The author perfectly captured the sense of powerlessness we felt while watching the story through the character of Xiaoling. ʕ´• ᴥ•̥`ʔ And Ellie showed us more than just laughter; we saw other human emotions appear in her. ┌(·.·)┘♪
83 likes4y ago
The pre-civilization arc is the best part of this novel. The later arcs are nothing but angst, and the writing isn't as good as the pre-civilization arc. But it's undeniable that this is a rare and very good long-form fanfiction about the anime/manga series. (As for why I lost a star, it's because Alicia died.
78 likes3y ago
This is an excellent novel. The story is beautiful, the plot is vivid, and it greatly engages the reader's emotions, giving them a positive and uplifting feeling.
75 likes3y ago
Sometimes I feel there's no need to continue reading this book. Xiaoling can't change the ending; she's just a character inserted into the story. But the author's intention wasn't to change it. The author wanted to write about the journey of a new Honkai God forced to grow up, influenced by Alicia.
72 likes3y ago
This book surpasses the original in some aspects. Even knowing the predetermined ending, I still felt heartbroken when I saw Alicia commit suicide. Thank you, Amo, and Daomen. Oh, and thank you, Alicia, for giving the Herrschers of the present civilization a possibility. Aimen.
58 likes4y ago
Hooray! A rare long fanfic about Honkai Impact 3rd has finally come to an end. I've been following it closely, and it's quite moving. The original characters, Fuling and Baizhi, are truly memorable, but their growth was marred by various setbacks. Fuling, who chose to split herself, and Baizhi, who stopped growing and might even regress, both paid the price.
55 likes2y ago