The Supernatural World: I Became the God of Cthulhu

The subject matter is problematic. The author doesn't understand the world-building, haphazardly adding various elements, blending ancient traditional monsters with Cthulhu mythos, resulting in confusion and a disjointed feel. The author should improve their writing style and the overall world-building; otherwise, they will never succeed.

This Cthulhu seems a bit authentic; whose Cthulhu is constantly being traded?

Hello author, I feel your Cthulhu story isn't quite authentic. It feels like you're using the Cthulhu theme as a skin to write a horror resurgence story. There are a few minor systemic errors, but the writing is good and the story is engaging. However, I'm a loyal Cthulhu fan and have high expectations for Cthulhu novels 🤦. This half-baked Cthulhu story is a bit hard for me to finish.

The main character hasn't uttered a single line in several chapters, as if Yu Yu were the main character.

Author, you should go to the palace (a fictionalized version of the novel). You've already exhausted this formula; I suggest you start a new book that's unrelated to this one.

This book is fantastic! Author, keep updating! The reason the rating is a bit low right now is because it hasn't reached 50 ratings yet. Once it does, and there are more five-star ratings, it will improve. Right now, it's almost all five-star ratings. This book is excellent, I think so too. It has great potential; it's the kind of novel book that will catch your eye. It's fantastic and really great.

You can't always rely on the protagonist; you have to rely on yourself. Otherwise, it's like a system. If the protagonist always relies on the system, I...

This book is great, but what I admire most is that Lin Dahai already has a wife—a female ghost in a red wedding dress. She's usually not unattractive 😊 If I could choose, I'd definitely choose her 🥰🥰

There are too many elements: evil spirits, ghosts, rules, doors, horror games—"it's all the same thing as doors." This combines almost every horror genre, and you're bound to mess it up later. What I can't accept is that everyone can become a ghost after dying. How are you going to write that? Taoist magic only works on evil spirits.

For a newcomer, this is a great achievement. Although some parts feel a bit rushed and lack depth, it's far better than those rambling, diary-like writings. I care more about the plot. As long as I like the plot and its unique features, and it's not just a rambling diary, I don't care about the writing style. Finally, I hope the author won't abandon the story or leave it unfinished (which is a bit difficult for authors on Tomato Bookstore 🤦). Keep it up!