Sequence: Lord of the Scarlet

What you wrote is to my liking, I am very happy, But you are short and weak, and I am not happy! ------Uncle Dong

It's not bad, but the heroine's role is a bit lacking 🍉

Author, someone is watching, you are not alone 👍 The protagonist is quite talkative, but also witty enough, and there is nothing surprising about it so far. If you have any interesting stories, come here if you like [laughing]

Author author, when will kidney become the number one tomato?

Overall, it looks good. (I will scold anyone who says I am asking for help)

The author's writing is very interesting. At least I have seen a lot of Gu Zhenren and some jokes that keep up with the trend, and the integration is not bad. Although there are some deliberate traces, if you don't look carefully, you can still feel the sense of substitution. The only thing I can't fault is that this is a fucking dog. With the amount of updates, I can say that the author is over there.

Five stars for encouragement The writing style is a bit too funny, and it feels like the characters are separated from the background layer... It's uncomfortable to watch.

It's okay, but the heroine's role is a bit lacking.

It's okay. It's pretty good-looking. So far, there aren't any obvious flaws. At least I haven't noticed it. The current development is quite interesting.

The author's writing is so good. I've seen the most exciting part. I'm stuck. Erase it.