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Emm, how can I put it, the personality of some characters is not very accurate. For example, Zhao Kongcheng will not kick the protagonist away, at most he will raise his eyebrows and give him a violent shock. And Xiaonan, in my impression, she is a very strong and brave girl. She can even fight against her own gods later on. She is also a night watchman. She has never seen any monsters before, and her psychological quality is very strong. She will not be afraid of the "weird" changes of the male protagonist, and she also uses words like alien. This is obviously not the Xiaonan we know. Besides, the people who read your article are all fans of Zhanshen. It will be uncomfortable to see that the character is not the original character. Here are some of my suggestions. （看前三十章有感）

I think the character of the protagonist is quite good. I like that the protagonist is quite dark, and there are not two male protagonists, and there is no female protagonist. I like the fact that the author does not have any messy people who are ambiguous with the protagonist. The author also writes very well, keep up the good work! ! 😉

It's quite interesting, especially the story of the [God-Killing] team in the later period, but there is no Cthulhu, and it doesn't fit well with the original work (probably because the author hasn't seen the finale yet), and then it's a bit unfinished in the end, but it's already considered exciting in the fanfic.

I remember it very well. 😊, The whole text is closely consistent with the original text. Without losing the humor. Every detail is restored to the point. This book is a good choice for fan fiction. I hope you keep writing. 👍👍👍

It is necessary for 395 stars. The author writes very well and is very close to the original text. The main character has a weird personality. I hope you will continue to work hard, Oli!

The first part is a bit embarrassing, but the more I read the later part, the more I am attracted to it. If you work hard, can you write another 100 million books? [Laughter] This book looks really good, but I didn't read enough.

It's well written, but a little short, and the characters gave me a weird feeling.

Good job! Between the moonlight and the snow, this is the third kind of stunning color. The plot is novel, the characters are vivid, the writing is beautiful, the description is detailed and fascinating, the details are very delicate, good book, good book

Not bad, but Lin Qiye seems to have been weakened. In the original work, Lin Qiye is very awesome and calm enough, but the Lin Qiye in this movie gives me the feeling that he will panic when something happens, and he doesn't have enough brain power [facepalm]

Ah, I've finished reading it, I think, there's nothing particularly embarrassing about this, right? There's a bit of strength in it, that is, in the front, um, when I joined the Night Watch, um... Anyway, overall it's okay. Anyway, I prefer to read it. In the end, please cheers for the author?