Demon King: Starting with The Outcast

Overall, it's still good; I wonder what happens later. Why is the author so unwilling to let it go?

The author is a new writer with a new book, so please give them your support! If you don't like the Sanqi section, just skip it. I know there are too many flaws. The author is a newbie, writing a book for the first time, and has little experience. I'm almost being criticized to the point of questioning my life!

I inexplicably dislike the "avatar/clone" trope, like a character who travels to a different world. If there's no female lead, I won't say anything. But if there is a female lead and she's just creating her own avatar, well... I also inexplicably dislike characters who start strong but always weaken themselves for some reason, getting constantly humiliated in other worlds.

Honestly, there's really no need for the clone plot. If you're going to time travel, just do it directly. The original body and the clone are two separate storylines, and you're only writing the clone's storyline, which is completely unnecessary. Furthermore, the clone plotline will really discourage many viewers. If you're going to time travel, just do it directly and come back later.

Is this all the assassin's personality is like? The title even mentions "demon," what does that even mean? Three hundred years of cultivation and this is his mentality? He hasn't achieved the mindset of a master at all. I couldn't stand it after reading for a while. I dropped it.

Isn't the world of *Soul Ferry* supposed to be a weak one? I vaguely remember it being mentioned in the show, by some powerful god in the TV series. They said a nuclear bomb could kill them. But then I saw the existence of a Great Luo Golden Immortal in it. Why do novels always seem to deliberately strengthen one world over another? Authors don't write novels for themselves; they write for us readers.

Why did I only give you one star? Do you understand? Why didn't Changsheng die? Are you crazy? What's with all this resentment? Changsheng was using Sanqi from the beginning, okay? Why didn't he just kill him? Why did he let him date Sanqi? Giving you one star is unnecessary.

The title of this book is prefixed with "Under One Person"... Um... The whole thing is a clone... And it even writes about other worlds, seriously? Either write about all the worlds, or finish writing about one person before writing about others, stop trying to ride the wave and then going off-topic! If you go off-topic, come back to it, shall we?

Seriously, I'm speechless. Giving away a woman you've raised for decades to someone else? What a lousy plot. I'm dropping this.

Gentleness is a treasure, and so are you ❤️ It's recommended to open packages on an empty stomach, because squatting down after eating is uncomfortable. Endure the overwhelming loneliness, and hide the vast universe within ✨ The three words more comforting than "I love you" are, in fact, "You have me"—Fei Wo Si Cun