
The Outcast: I Am Wang Bing
一人之下,我为王并
- Status
- Ongoing
- Length
- 127k Words
- Genre
- Anime Fanfiction
- Updated
- 3y ago
- Source
- Fanqie
Synopsis
65Chapters
1Reads
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The Outcast, With Chen Duo as the Female Lead
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Any The Outcast Fanfiction, Preferably with a Good Relationship with the Old Celestial Master?
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Reader comments 22
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Are you sure what's written in the bunker is OK? Is it really better for Chen Duo to stay in the bunker? The bunker awakening is very problematic. Otherwise Chen Duo wouldn't have run away in the end. You obviously have the ability to change Chen Duo, but you can't do it if you wake up Chen Duo yourself? After returning home, I even had doubts about Zhiwo. I thought the Long Aotian look at the beginning was very unfair. So you told me this. Isn't it natural for the strong to have these? What's the problem if I don't understand? And you didn't follow the Zhui span template at the beginning, and you didn't follow the Long Aotian template. IQ and all. Later on, it would be outrageous to say that you become stronger after you become stronger. If you don't have the IQ at the beginning and if you cross, I won't be able to see the back, and I'll run away from the front. The latter part has an inexplicable feeling of giving away a girl. I always feel like my wife has been given away. Can't you wake up yourself? Can't you send Chen Duo to school? Solving these is just a matter of writing a few sentences in the text. You can obviously see better results. And it's quite baffling. You wrote 9527 yourself that it is better to go to Kingpin's place than to the bunker. The characters you write all know what to bring back. But the plot behind it is still attractive. But some points need to be changed. I have low poison resistance. It is recommended that if you want to write a good article, you should start over and get it right. Don't do this in the middle, and you will have doubts about yourself, or something is wrong with you. The coolness suddenly dropped [smile][smile]
I was speechless, just like a loser 😅
It's nothing special. I didn't watch it while driving. The plot is really annoying. The handling of women's problems is a bit awkward. Feng Shayan said it was really unnecessary to write it like this. There is also a picture of a young master with a great forehead and a strong follower. From the first look, I can tell that it is quite lame, but I won't give it 2 stars or 1 star because of the harem. But it's too much to pretend to be dog meat. I've read it all and have no desire to even give negative reviews for free. It's hard to say anything.
I want to ask, how did you set up this book? Wang Bing is only ten years old, so why is Feng Zhenghao? It's the Ten Guys. There's something wrong with this setting. At that time, there was no Feng Zhenghao in Shiguo. Have you seen the anime? When did Feng Zhenghao become a ten-man?
Where's the Wang family's special skill, Shentu? It was written like Long Aotian Wen, and everyone also had a wave of wisdom 🍉.
The essence of anything is value. Wang Bing is gifted, otherwise Wang Ai would not pamper him so much. In the anime, we only see his evil. However, he practiced Sanfu in winter and Sanjiu in summer. The value of Wang Bing is that he allowed Wang Ai to see the future. In the world of martial arts, the strongest determines the rules. I saw the chapter about Feng Shayan. The novel is good, but it makes me feel that it doesn't make sense.
I finally read a book that is both crazy and arrogant. Come on, the author.
How can I put it, the writing is okay, but from the protagonist, it can be seen that the author's servile mentality is a bit serious...
Really, I think it could have been written before Xia He met Zhang Lingyu. It can also make up for Zhang Lingyu's regret, right?
The part about Feng Shayan seems really bad.