Naruto: Walking Through the Thunder

Are there any authors who wouldn't give themselves five-star reviews? (๑•́ ₃ •̀๑) I have no problem with you pointing out mistakes in the comment area, but please don't rate them maliciously. If you don't like it, you can just leave. After all, everyone has their own preferences, and I am no exception. If you see a book you don't like, just flip through it. I will only give a negative review unless the author is disgusting. I have neither logical errors, nor have I deceived other people. If you give me a negative review based on your own preferences after reading it for less than thirty minutes, you have not even understood it. For example, why is it in Konoha? A bad review. Why is this a nanny article? Who can bear a bad review? Have you seen the back? Let's just say it's a nanny article. The scariest thing is that when I saw the title of Chapter 5, I just said that I am a system writer... Another bad review... There is really no need to be so arbitrary, okay. So I have recently controlled the review, and I will control the review from time to time. It is really unnecessary. If you don't like this kind of novel, just leave. This means that you don't like my novel. Giving a negative review is not in line with your preferences. If possible, I hope that the negative review will say that my plot is poor and my writing is not good. Directly point out my shortcomings instead of not saying anything, coming over and disgusting me and then leaving.

I have seen an author who gave himself four stars. He also posted a comment saying that it was a mistake and he lost one star.

There are a few poisonous points 1. The Third Generation. The Third Generation is a relatively shrewd person. He has been monitoring the whole village. He should know all the things the protagonist does. Just the self-created Muji Ninjutsu alone should make the Third Generation treat him as a genius, not to mention that he has been in contact with Kakashi. Kakashi will definitely report it to the Third Generation. Besides, as mentioned before, he is the number one genius in the Ninja School. Why didn't the third generation pay attention to the Uchiha orphans and the Nine-Tailed Jinchuuriki? Maybe it was to pave the way for defection, but it's still a bit unreasonable. Also, I hope that the combat power will not collapse. I haven't developed the school record and have been eliminated. I don't really hope to surpass the Six Paths. If the plot is too early and invincible, I may be able to go to heaven. I hope this book aims to unify the ninja world and bring peace to the ninja world.

There are only 20 chapters, which is too few and still leaves a lot to be desired. I hope the author can write a better plot and find some women, such as Terumi Mei and Kage Kurotsuchi. 32 Likes٩(๑ᵒ̴̶̷Ո᷄ᗨᵒ̴̶̷͈᷅)و

I read a few of the author's pictures and thought they were well written, with less nonsense. However, I think the pace should be slowed down as much as possible and not written too fast. But if you have an arrangement, then forgive me for talking too much, the writing is good! A eunuch. What a pity

Let's just say that this book is really good. At least I've read several of them and this one is quite to my liking, so please keep up the good work, author!

Come on, author! Happy New Year author!

Why does Naruto's book have a bumpy cover?

Not bad! High-quality Naruto fan fiction has its own unique world view. I hope the author can control the overall situation while coding non-stop 20 hours a day! Come on＾0＾~

It's great to have less chapters and more words