Naruto: The Holy Lord's Jinchūriki

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Well written, keep it up! Even Itachi, Obito, and Madara don't need to be cleansed. What they do is essentially for their own selfish reasons. If the protagonist is not strong enough, they won't care. They will just crush him to death like ants. So kill them, reincarnate them, use absolute control, and become a tool in your hand! This is what normal people should do. Finally, I wish you better and better as you write.

Not bad, but some cognitions are too poor for a 13-year-old. Geniuses who become ninjas in Uchiha will attend the meeting earlier and will know the relationship between Konoha and Uchiha. And after you recovered your memory, you knew that Liu Dao had peeked. Didn't you think that he would stop you? Naruto and Sasuke don't need some control methods?

The protagonist is a bit stupid and silly in this writing. Given the environment he was in at that time and his relationship with the village chief, it's not like he doesn't know everything, right?

It's pretty good, come on 💪

Very well written. Caiti is also good.

It's not as good as Sasuke, he still knows how to take revenge, you can just mess it up, right?

It's poisonous. If it's a local, it's impossible for him to know the art of reincarnation. If it is a time traveler, it is too rubbish, because he must have seen the Hokage to know the technique of reincarnation in the earth, and he also knows about genocide, but in the end he did nothing, and he has not yet opened his eyes at the age of 13. It's too poisonous. Let's reopen it.

Awesome, author, come on!

His personality is his biggest flaw, and he doesn't even treat Konoha dogs.