One Piece: The Most Cautious Deputy Officer

Can Ace be saved? When I watched One Piece, I felt that Ace was quite pitiful. Of course this is just my personal hope The book of your photos is very beautiful! Remember to teach that naughty boy Ace a lesson, but I really don't want Ace to die. I feel very sad every time I see this section in the cartoon <(ToT)>. Of course, this is just my expectation.

It's pretty good, but the comma is in the wrong place.

Give it a six-star rating, and the remaining four stars will be given to you slowly in the coming days. (Who asked the author to give me a like?)

It's hard to make up for some of the tension, and there are some hooks, but at least it doesn't have those eight-year-old major generals, sixteen-year-old generals, and those things about Li Saipu. You can read it with your mind. The protagonist can't be said to be stubborn, but he is more cautious [laughing evilly], a little funny [you can taste it carefully], and the plot is also somewhat funny. Coming out to hang out is about human accidents [laughing evilly]

I really like this way of writing. It's a rare book that I can't bear to save. I also love the unexpected situations that always occur in the plot. The protagonist can deal with it and really does it. At present, the development of fruitful abilities is a bit lacking, such as building a platform on the sea, and the dragon's head will spit out stones to create a castle. The protagonist's fighting ability is 50-50 equal to everyone, but I really love it It is also mainly developed from He Wen's perspective, but the introduction of other characters is a bit lacking. Xiliu and the others' current situation can only be described by fighting. There is still little description of many characters, such as the author's introduction of the character who changes his fate, or Perona's bear and so on.

I don't understand. As for Pluto Rayleigh, the protagonist is on the pirate side, and Rayleigh is 50-50 with the generals. The protagonist is on the navy side, and Rayleigh is 50-50 with the two generals [Thinking][Thinking][Thinking][Thinking]

It's already a very good book. The logic makes sense, and there is no system that says you are invincible. Just step by step, practice it, it's really good, it's really good. It just lacks a female companion. I support conscientious works.

The book is okay, but it's a bit uncomfortable to read if the first person is not used. The author gives you 4 stars

Slow to heat up, but beautiful There are a lot of misplaced punctuation marks, so I listen to books Write the characters' personalities well

Except for the sentence break, which was a bit uncomfortable in the early stage, the content is still good. The content is really exciting, the combat power is not broken, and there is nothing that makes me addicted. The only discomfort is the breakpoint problem in the front, but after reading it for a while, I naturally ignored this problem. The content rendering is okay. I personally skipped part of it, and I didn't read the ending. After all, the comic The anime is not finished yet, and I don't really want to touch on the ending. In the front, I only jump into some life parts. Overall, it is very exciting to watch, and the writing is average (better than me [heartfelt]), but the content described is quite immersive. The only shortcoming may be the narration problem in the first few chapters, which is a bit annoying, but everything else is fine.