Transmigrate into a Book as the Villain: Fate's Chosen One, You're Out

Author, you are really a talented person and an outsider, Zhang San. You've been healed. 😂😂Come on!

Overall it's pretty good, just a bit lacking.

Let me post a book review. I was very angry at the beginning. I was really angry. Especially the first chapter. I was almost pressed to the ground by Ye Fan, the son of luck. But in order to see Ye Fan's miserable state, I chose to read it. As my uncle shouted, I did not regret reading it. Although the previous chapter was very angry and the same old story. Routine, but I have to say that this article has its novelty and merits. It can be seen from Fanzi. I am very curious whether Chen Yang will really form a cp with Fanzi after "conquering" Lin Feng. The only shortcoming is that there are too few words. I hope to occasionally burst out when I am not busy. It will be more painful to wait every day 😂😂😂

The author is great, he is not very demanding and can just update one or two chapters a day [smile][smile][smile] So, you came to this point [laughing evilly][laughing evilly][laughing evilly]

It's a very good novel about a villain's harem. I highly recommend everyone to read it. The only flaw is the dream world of the third world. It feels like starting from scratch. It's too long and makes people uncomfortable to read. Come on, author, please don't finish it badly. It can involve cultivating immortals, but it is best for the protagonist to just test the elixir system and take two days off to improve. Don't focus solely on cultivation. The main thing is to deceive the protagonist and accept the heroine.

Overall, it's a very good work. However, after reading the last updated chapter, I concluded that I didn't think much about the subsequent plot development when I started to conceive it. The second half of the story is a bit out of line with the previous one. If I don't pay attention to the later part, it will be difficult to write.

The author is a great author. His works are very exciting and rich in content. However, the content of the last few stories is a bit outstanding and not as exciting as before. The description of the protagonist is not as important as the previous stories. I hope that the next story can be like before. Novels are for entertainment, not for writing difficult stories. If you write a refreshing article, it will be more popular among readers! No matter what, I will definitely finish reading this novel. I hope the author can work hard!

The content is very good. Although it is a summoning flow, it is handled very well and the emotional line is well written. It's a masterpiece

I think it's pretty good. Why only give it four stars? I think any power in the novel should not exceed the country, let alone act recklessly on the country's territory. The country is always the strongest backing, and no one can control it. Of course, this is just my opinion. Maybe my patriotism is too strong.

To be honest, author, this novel you wrote is very good, but why is the rating only over 8 points? It is probably because of someone's malicious intentions. Let's not talk about this book. To be honest, it is very good. Keep up the good work, I will still support you.