Before the Protagonist Arrives, I'll Take the Heroine Home

Although the book I wrote is not very good, it is the most in line with my own ideas. In the past, when reading other people's novels, I would always encounter annoying points from time to time, which made me not want to read them, so I had to write them myself. Similarly, if you encounter something that doesn't suit your liking while reading this book, please leave as soon as possible. Reading online novels is for relaxation and happiness, and you don't have to endure it all the time. I'm a newbie, my writing is not good, please point out any mistakes, I'd be very grateful.

Um~ How should I put it? I feel a few things right now. 1. The relationship between the protagonist and the heroine is too strange. 2. There is no intuitive confrontation between the protagonist and the male protagonist. 3. The world outlook, outlook on life and values ​​are not very good. 4. There is too little description of the world background, character background, and family background. 5. There is too little foreshadowing, basically none. 6. After accepting the heroine, it seems that she is only useful to the protagonist, and there is no other emotional drama or expression. 7. While saying that you have no luck, you are always there when something happens to the heroine. The son of luck is like your background. 8. You can extend the time to deal with the male protagonist and deal with multiple male protagonists at the same time. 9. You can feel for yourself that the character of the protagonist is really strange. No other feelings yet

No bitterness, great hatred, deep hatred, licking the dog and breaking off the engagement👍

It's a pseudo-villain story. The protagonist's character is relatively kind, and it may be that he expresses a side specifically to attack the heroine. But most of them are written around the female protagonist, and there is less competition with the "protagonist" in the script.

At first glance, Ding Zhen identified it as a rare good book, rated ten or even nine out of ten. Gua! I hope this book will become popular and attract more and more people with weak magnetic fields who will be excited to read it.

It's a pretty good read. The only thing that's a little bit toxic is that you have an extra sister. If you don't accept it, you won't really give it away. Moreover, you even praised it as being prettier than the heroine. Those written like this and not collected are basically finished. This book is so refreshing and comfortable to read.

Not bad, not bad, but I don't know if there will be an opportunity for elixirs in the future and I will replace the elixirs with fake ones with shit or laxatives in them like Tang Yu's book to deceive the protagonist 😏 I'm looking forward to it

Is this kind of villain story still acceptable? The villain is just a position, the protagonist is personified, the harem has feelings, and the heroine can be more or less. She must have feelings, otherwise it will be a stud story! Also, this is a villain story after all, and I'm still not ruthless enough towards the Son of Destiny. I hope to strengthen it, be kind to my own people, and be more ruthless towards the Son of Destiny.

I personally think it's good. I like to read this kind of novel with multiple female villains recently, so the author should update more soon. I can't read enough now.

Well written