Reborn: I Made My Obsessive Master Turn Dark

My master finally stood up. Ziyu was the group's favorite, and he was so good at flirting, and my master was also too fond of me. There are also Tan Ze and Xi Chi, who want Xi Shen to knock Tan Ze down! Yuanhe is silly and cute. The second senior brother has a long road to pursue his wife. I really want him to catch up with me soon. I want to eat sweets. I hope they can all be together. Will there be a deputy CP in the future! Everyone starts to smoke, author, come on!

Ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh speed speed speed speed of speed speed speed of speed of speed of speed of the speed of the speed of the speed of my mother-in-law I love it so much. I strongly recommend it😘😘😘😘

It's very interesting, I feel like this book is going to be a hit! There are many deputy CPs. This book is written by the master and his disciples. The master is extremely possessive! It's beautiful. The author takes great care of his health! 😀😀

Personal opinion, don't comment unless you like it The plot is indeed very good, a rare idea, but the writing style could be improved a bit. Let me talk about the plot first. It is very good, with ups and downs. Those who have watched it will know that there is absolutely no fault in the plot, and there is no phenomenon of digging holes but not filling them. It is indeed very attractive. There are many good points in the comment section, so I won't go into details and focus on the not so good points. Let's talk about the writing style. First of all, everyone in the novel has a different personality, so the way each of them speaks should also be different, but this is not reflected in this book. Everyone feels like the author is speaking, and they use the author's usual sentence patterns, which is a bit uncharacteristic. Secondly, to highlight a character's personality and shape its fullness, more side descriptions should be used. In this book, There are a lot of sentences like "but xxx still loves xxx". This description is too thin, and the characters are not three-dimensional; finally, although this book has a lot of r's, some parts are unreasonable. It is not good to always talk about this or threaten others. It is the same every time, and it seems numb (I know they are friends, but it is okay to mention it occasionally, there is no need to do it every time). A small addition: I think the author's control over language still needs to be tempered. I remember that I seemed to have read another book by the author. Although that book was not as complete in structure as this one, the language was very humorous and fit the characters themselves. In summary, the overall story is very good, otherwise I would not give it four stars. The author has maintained the story structure very well and has some ideas. He just needs to strengthen the writing a little. It is a type where the plot can be given 5 points, but the writing is a bit lame. The writing style is indeed difficult to practice, but I don't mean to ask the author to be super good. I just hope it can reach an above-average level, otherwise it will be a waste of such a good idea.

It's the first time I've seen a master-disciple story about Master's attitude. It's very good. It hit the highway soon after the beginning🌝🌝 I like it so much and I'm looking forward to the rest of the plot. I give you a lot of support from the author and show my heart! !

It's developing so fast. This is the fastest-growing novel I've ever read. However, it's so good and sweet. I really like the interaction between Master and Yu'er. I can't get enough of it. I hope the author will update it soon, and I hope it will be sweet to the end. Good luck to the author!

It's a very good book. The master has four disciples, the senior brother, the second senior brother, the senior sister, the junior junior brother. The master and the junior junior brother are a pair, the senior brother and the second senior brother are a pair. The senior sister is not wanted. Haha, I laughed to death. It's very interesting to read.

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The pampered young master of the rebirth group vs. The sick and spoiled master at the head of the group, this pairing can be said to be very awesome! The full text is about sweet pets and no cruelty, constant dog food, and a lot of cp to beat (￢㉨￢) Welcome little cuties to join in!

I really love this book, the cp is very sweet and touching, but I prefer Xichi and Tanze [Send my heart] [Send my heart] [Send my heart] Of course, Xiao Yuer and Master, the senior brother and the second senior brother, the eldest brother and senior sister of the Shen family are also super sweet [Send my heart] [Send my heart] [Send my heart] I only thought of writing a book review after it was finished, I really got into it [laughing and crying]. This book is one of the few books about Master. Xiao Yuer cherishes Master even more after his rebirth. This candy is really sweet. Whether it is friendship or love, it is super beautiful! I support the author greatly, see you in the next book~ I will continue to read the story of the Immortal Master and the Ghost King's Apprentice~ The author is very impartial ❤️ [laughing and crying], one of the masters got up, and the other fell down [laughing and crying] [laughing and crying] [laughing and crying] @daiyu See you next time~