Oh, Master, You Mustn’t

Master stood up. It's not easy.

Ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh from me from me. There are too many mistakes in the characters, please correct them quickly! You have written everything, why don't you do your best? I watched it all the way and found that the plot is very exciting, but there are too many mistakes. [Face-palming][Face-palming] It affects readers' desire to continue reading. Please correct the mistakes made by the characters. It will easily become popular [Cool]

That's it, that's it. I always feel that there are many holes that have not been filled. I also want to see their soy sauce stuffed rice. Say important things three times: Is that the end? Is this the end? Is this the end? [Nearly crying][Nearly crying][Nearly crying][Nearly crying][Nearly crying][Nearly crying][Nearly crying][Nearly crying][Nearly crying][Nearly crying][Nearly crying][Nearly crying][Nearly crying][Nearly crying][Nearly crying] [Nearly crying][Nearly crying][Nearly crying][Nearly crying][Nearly crying][Nearly crying][Nearly crying][Nearly crying][Nearly crying][Nearly crying][Nearly crying][Nearly crying][Nearly crying][Nearly crying][Nearly crying]

This book is good to read [Adoration] [Adoration] [Adoration] [Adoration] But the ending is so sudden [Crying] [Crying] [Crying] Guangxiapin, no wedding [Crying] [Crying] No bridal chamber [Crying] [Crying] The deputy cp didn't write the result either [cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry]

I think it looks great! But why are there so few people? [What] The plot is also very interesting👍

I really like it, but there are a lot of typos and it's a bit hard to read.

After reading this book, I want to leave a "reading mark" [Working on manuscript][Working on manuscript] The theme of this book is quite new. The master in the previous life was harmed by the so-called disciple of the Son of Destiny. After rebirth, the Master fell in love with the disciple who was not paid attention to by him, and secretly planned to take revenge on the Son of Destiny. But! ! [Working on manuscript][Working on manuscript] The biggest shortcoming of this book is that there are too many wrong names. Sometimes the sentence is obviously not said by this person, but the author made typos. There are too many places in this book. Another point is that the ending is a bit rushed. There is no introduction to the married life of the two masters, nor the final ending of the Son of Luck and those bad guys. If you don't mind, don't read! ! [Note][Note]

It's good, but there are a lot of holes that have been dug but not filled. I'm really curious about the last one: 1. Did the younger brother get together with the older brother and get promoted? 2. What happened to Master Yu and his younger apprentice in the end? 3. Did senior brother Hua Yongning and senior brother Kong get together in the end, and what was the grudge between the two families like, and was it resolved in the end? 4. Now that I've been hired, shouldn't I be given a bridal chamber [I'm about to cry]

Not bad! Why is no one watching it?

The plot is very novel and the plot is quite interesting! The characters' personalities are also very interesting! It is also the first dual-male protagonist that I have the patience to watch. In a word, it is good! The author must keep up his good work! Looking forward to your next perfect creation!