National Mecha Warfare: Made-in-China Mechs Go on a Rampage

As a refreshing novel, the plot idea is very good, but after reading a few more chapters, you can see that the author's writing style is relatively green. Overall, it is a mecha-war adventure in a different world, with a focus on patriotism emotionally. It can be seen that the author is trying his best to portray the characters, but they are not delicate enough. A few more close-ups could be considered. The image creation of other characters is not sufficient, such as Jiang Zhengtian. When there are too many people to describe one by one, this character is the representative of the entire Dragon Kingdom team and can reflect the spirit of the Dragon Kingdom team. Moreover, he appears more frequently and has enough opportunities to describe. There are also some loopholes in the ability setting. For example, the mecha's movement speed and attack speed are so fast, how can the operator's reaction ability keep up? As a novel with science fiction as the main element, I think some places still need to be more rigorous. Some people may say, "How come there are so many things in this exciting article?" But people can't just stand still, right? Readers can ignore it, but I hope all authors can learn and change. ——I would like to dedicate this subjective speech to the author

Brothers, this mecha novel is definitely the best among the mecha novels. A man's romance, mecha protects the country, and the Dragon Kingdom is unparalleled.

Why can't I put pictures in book reviews?😭I want to put pictures. 😭

It's a pretty good book. It can be seen that the author has written it very carefully, but there are still some minor flaws in some details.

Very good novel! I just like this kind of novel about team fighting, and fighting for the country is also my heart's desire. Big cheers for the author! (ง•̀_•́)ง

To be honest, when I saw Dawei Tianlong, I already saw the advanced version. I saw millions of A-level mechanical beasts appearing in front of the protagonist, and the protagonist suddenly shouted: How dare these little mechanical beasts do their job. I saw tens of thousands of nuclear bombs appearing in the sky. Coupled with the enhanced attack power, it can cause tens of millions of damage to those below. And carry out a nuclear strike. 

I didn't originally read novels about mecha technology, but now I'm short of them. This introduction looks pretty good. After reading it, I found it's pretty good and very interesting. Good luck, author.

A self-motivated author whose writing is greater than his plot. It was a joy to write. The Tomato platform is somewhat lacking in mecha articles, but we don't think this is a mecha article. To attract people to this world, there is a little space of the main god, a game mode for all. Explode the equipment of the mecha, and then upgrade the mecha, which has the shadow of online games. Compared with the old Mecha Infantry, the novels of "Legend of Masters" have less flavor in them. There was some disappointment, it's not that the novel was bad, it just didn't live up to expectations. I am a multi-female protagonist, should the author consider developing an emotional line? It is suggested that the author try to move what the person said before the person's name. I prefer this. Personal preference. For example Reader: "The author will update quickly." Change to "The author will update soon," the reader said eagerly, the hand holding the blade trembling slightly with force, and a hint of coldness leaked out of his slightly squinted eyes. My humble opinion, for reference only.

The author is quite smart, but I feel that all the cool articles have a weakness and cannot last long. Especially the cool articles about data flow will gradually become boring later [laughing and crying] I have read several of the author's works, all of which are short stories of hundreds of thousands of words. They are all cool articles, but because of the fast pace and relatively short length, they cleverly avoid this weakness. Returning to the topic, I think the description of mechas in this novel is more in line with the mecha world in my mind. The worldview and foreshadowing are also more attractive. The overall writing is good, there are no major pitfalls, and the pace is brisk. It's just that sometimes the data is not accurate enough and needs to be improved. There's nothing else wrong with it, it's a good book to read.

Just because of our China, we can become a five-star!