My Sword Immortal Disciple Fell to the Demonic Path and Awakened Mind Reading

The dog food is so delicious, and the female protagonist can clearly hear the male protagonist's little thoughts. Lovers finally get married, and others witness it with their own eyes. I still prefer the heroine to be more aloof.

Very very beautiful! The male protagonist is emotionally strong. No ambiguity, single-mindedness, and good writing style. Come on, author, you must be on your own. Write more novels like this in the future. No ambiguity, no harem, and the cool aspect needs to be strengthened. System cheats have no sense of existence

This book is really good, but if you look at the male characters, the male protagonist should be the more active one, and this male protagonist is a bit passive 😂 But it can be considered a new experience, and the female protagonist is also well-shaped. It may be a little bit annoying at the beginning, but the transformation of the female protagonist after each chapter is still a bit sweet, and then it is just forced to feed the dog food o( ❛ᴗ❛ )o If the female protagonist in the future is more soft and cute in front of the male protagonist, calling her master to act like a baby, I might be so sweet 🌝 It's really great, come on, come on! ❤️

One of the most devoted novels I have ever read

This novel is so well written that I have only written dozens of chapters. To be honest, if I continue to write it, I should be able to write more than 1,000 chapters at most, and at least a few hundred chapters to write out the dimensional wall of reality and the illusory world later and buy some foreshadowing. , This novel is not rated 8.7, The highest rating is 9.4. Unfortunately, this novel has too few articles, and many things are not written in detail. They are all very brief. If you write in detail, you can dig out a lot of foreshadowing and write a lot. This novel probably describes the protagonist, playing a game, traveling through the space of cultivating immortals, or the dimensional wall. The plot is a bit like the movie Mural, or those movies that combine Chinese and Western styles. Traveling to the future, or a different world to save Sun Monkey, or something I can't remember the name of. At the end, it is either a dream in a virtual void, or a place that can never be returned. Many novels and movies have borrowed this routine. This novel has three major shortcomings. The first is that there are few articles. The second is that some plots are relatively simple, and the third is that the foreshadowing of the subsequent plots is not written out. It can also be said to be a fly in the ointment. But if you think about it from another perspective, it can also be said that it is an alternative and perfect way of constructing a small foreshadowing and a micro world view in short articles. Was the experience a dream or reality? It is also possible that everything in front of you is fake and illusory, and what you see, hear, and touch may not be accurate! Maybe it's true. There are no absolute facts in front of us, everything is questionable and comes from skepticism.

(I have read the entire book and will write a review) It's a very nice short sweet story. There are basically no major flaws in the whole book, except that you might not be able to figure out the relationship between the protagonists at first. I didn't watch it very seriously, but overall I can tell that the protagonist is a time-traveler who travels into the game world and needs to ascend in order to go home. The heroine is his big apprentice. She likes the protagonist when she grows up, but later falls in love and turns evil. Later, the heroine has the ability to listen to the male protagonist's voice, so she starts to conquer the heroine. Also, the male major does not study the Wuqing Dao. He only needs to give gifts to others to increase their favorability to gain cultivation (something they just need). The Wuqing Dao is just a cover. Then the ending of this book has a twist, but the extra chapter makes up for it very well. Don't ignore the extra chapter to read the ending, it's really sweet. Good looking, recommended.

It's pretty good-looking, but due to a setting problem, it's bound to be accompanied by a little stomachache. The result is that one moment my aunt is laughing, and the other is a stomachache. . . Uh uh uh. The progress of the relationship between the male and female protagonists seems a bit inexplicable, mainly because. . Setting issues cannot be avoided. The writing style is very good, and it is fully qualified as a dog food article, but the part in Wuwang City in the middle is uncomfortable to watch. To put it bluntly, the only bad point of the work is the setting of the male protagonist, which leads to the lack of plot line and the need to over-focus on the emotional line. However, because the strong first impression at the beginning does not match the slowly narrowing distance between the two, it leads to the lack of perception. I will only talk about the shortcomings here. In fact, the works are still very beautiful, but such works often cannot be written for a long time. That's a pity. In addition, not everyone can accept this setting, and the male protagonist's long-term inaction in cultivation makes the fairy-cultivating dog food less of a fairy-cultivating feeling. . . It's also because of the setting. . Summary: The early stage is amazing, but the middle stage is a little stomach-ache. It mainly depends on whether you can accept the settings of the male and female protagonists. The main reason is that it lacks the logic and plot that it should have. Although it is not foggy, it does not look clear. As a dog food article, it will make people feel bright at first sight, but after reading it for a long time, it will feel boring. Just like eating snacks, an occasional bag will make my taste buds feel happy, but eating it all the time will make people feel tired. It lacks clear logic and plot lines, and in the end it still cannot be used as a staple food for me. I don't know what male and female videos are, personal opinion comes first. Of course, you can't write a long dog food article without a plot line. .

After reading it, let's give a brief review Personally, I think it's quite reasonable in terms of a single essay, but I think there's a bit of a problem with the disconnect between the setting of the male protagonist and his actual performance. I can only say that the author doesn't have a very good grasp of the details in this area, but it's understandable for the first time he's writing a male story, and then there's no problem with the progress of the plot, and the sweetness of the male and female protagonists is also very sweet. , The speed of the car is also quite fast, but the setting of reading the mind is a bit fresh in the early stage, but in the later stage, it feels a bit tasteless and a pity to abandon. It is better not to use this setting at the beginning and use other methods to replace it, but it is definitely good that the author is willing to make new attempts. There is also the problem of the ending progressing too fast and too hastily. Points will definitely be deducted as appropriate. Finally, let me talk about a minor point that is not a lightning point, that is, the author used the male protagonist's words to criticize the harem and stallion novels. I personally have no idea about it, but that chapter was quite noisy. I personally think that the harem novels and the stallion novels should be discussed separately. There is absolutely no problem in criticizing the latter. The former still depends on the arrangement of the author of the article, and cannot be criticized with a stick. Damn, what I watch depends entirely on my mood. I can watch everything from Danmei harem to single heroine. Anyway, I basically don't take the protagonist's perspective. The above is my personal opinion. If you don't like it, don't criticize it. Personally, I still like the author's style and writing style, but I hope there will be less controversial arguments in the author's articles. If you have anything to say, just say it outside the article. In conclusion, there is nothing to say about the author's writing style, but some details were not handled well when writing a male video for the first time. However, the emotional description of the male and female protagonists is still worthy of praise. The driving speed is also very fast, and the ending is somewhat disappointing. For me personally, unless the previous article particularly moved me, I will definitely deduct points for a rushed or unfinished ending, so I give it four stars. I also hope that the author's next book will be better.

It's very good, it feels quite novel. If it becomes popular, it will kill me, and it will help the author.

I think the writing is pretty good. I don't really like the feeling of hearing the voice of the heart. It's like all the secrets are heard. But if the voice of the heart is not heard here, I'm afraid the misunderstanding will continue. Most of the time, the male protagonist will be raped by the female protagonist. In the end, he will be locked up in a small dark room. She has a child, and the one where the heroine is the Demon Emperor is similar to Yuanying. She is the Demon Emperor. I feel that the author is more suitable to write about daily life. I personally think that a mildly yandere is fine. A severe yandere is too crazy and dangerous [face covering]. Keep up the good work, author.