Tomb Raiding: I'm the Mound Raider, Turning Tombs into Demolition Sites

It looks good. When the little brother was injured, he rescued him so that he would be less hurt. Although I know it is just a fan fiction, I still hope that when the little brother is injured, someone will lend a helping hand and save him.

The writing is very good. Add a little more emotional scenes with the little brother. If that doesn't work, action scenes can also be used. I don't want to pick sugar-coated scenes!

Come on, dog! ! ! ! ! The new book is very nice and I really like the setting. As expected of you (pay more attention to rest and don't work too hard)

Come on, dog! ! ! I got it from my eldest son, and my second son is also great. He likes all the big books ✺(^▽^✺) ✺(^O^)✺ (✺^▽^)✺

Yes, although there is a system, it does not highlight the invincibility of the protagonist, which makes it look smooth.

It looks good, the writing is fluent, the logic is consistent, and the characters are not broken! It's just short and concise, I look forward to a longer update!

Waving the flag and shouting at the dog, come in and see! ! ! ! First, there are two male protagonists, the protagonist X is the brother CP; Secondly, the protagonist starts with no strength and is worth a lot of money, but will gradually become stronger; Third, the writing is super good, and the characters of the protagonist and supporting characters are perfectly created; Fourth, PS: I am a battle-damaged brother in the sanatorium. It is really great that my teammates feel sorry for the protagonist and I don't let them bleed.

Author, you have to be responsible to me 😭😭😭😭. After reading your two books, I can't stand reading other authors' books. I feel OOC when I read them. The other authors are not the protagonists or Wu Xie turned into green tea, but they talk too much. The plot feels too... (I'm sorry, I don't mean to belittle. Other authors, but I have to compare) Author, your imagination and pitfalls, as well as the plot are really shocking, the character setting is well maintained, and what happened with Hu Baqia's tomb and the human head poison and bloodline with Laojiumen later made me both clear and confused. It seems that I need to play the second or third time to get it. The explanation is thorough, and the connection with Qinling in the beginning of the first book is so great, and it also provides a follow-up to the mine trip of Fo Ye Erhong and others. After watching the Laojiumen film and television drama, I really didn't hate Fo Ye, but I hated Fo Ye after reading the original book, but the author allowed me to preserve my love for them in this book, and Qi Yu is also alive Yes, although the ghost doll is still there, its meaning is different. I look forward to the author's plot later. The undercurrent behind the story is really too great. I don't know if the people and stories behind the scenes that promote them are still connected with the ghost blowing the lamp. The author must fill the hole he dug😜😜

I finally have someone to feel pain for, and I can fulfill some of my fantasies about Tomb Raiders Notes. It's really great! Both books are well written and more in line with the characters. It has filled in some of the pitfalls of Uncle San, and although it has added some pitfalls, I have to say that Big Brain is great, the writing is very good, and the writing style is also very good. I read the novel very carefully, and even read every paragraph of the book reviews written by other readers in the book. However, I am not very good at speaking, so I don't post many book reviews, but I really like this book. Although there have been few updates recently, I just need to follow my own steps and ensure the quality. Come on, it's great!

Actually, I haven't read it yet…but I'm just giving it a good review because it's a book written by Gouzi! Woohoo, I forgot until I saw this book that Liangzi's story was coming to an end... Fortunately, the names are all the same... Come on, Gouzi! I love you so much (^з^)! I strongly recommend Daomi to check out Gouzi's opening Qinling System. It's really good-looking. It's different from other stolen fan fiction... It doesn't collapse the character design. It gives people the feeling that the protagonist has really joined them, rather than the forcibly inserted feeling like other books... (I'm back to make a review. If nothing else, Gouzi will open a new book, it should be original... Support!)