White Hair

It's well written, cheers on the original poster. The writing is good, indeed similar to when Jiuqiu wrote The Broken Robe. The story is also good. It is rare to find an author who is so patient in writing stories. Some things take time to settle, and the same goes for articles. Be patient and finish writing first. Four stars because it's not over yet, come on! Author, your writing style and talent are quite good. If you are unpopular and unreasonable, keep writing. You will definitely not be buried.

This book is similar to The Broken Robe of Jiuqiu, which is mainly about Taoism. I like it very much.

I'm not an expert in this area, but I still want to express my opinion. After I carefully read your question and thought about it for a long time, I actually don't know how to answer it. As I said at the beginning, I am not an expert in this area.

I think it's better than "The Broken Robe"! The characters' temperaments and thoughts in the book are very reasonable, and the storyline contains positive energy without being artificial [like]. The author's language in this book is fluent and not verbose, and his expressions are well-written, making it easy and natural to read. Unlike Jiuqiu's works, the protagonist's character and style are relatively boring. Come on author, you can do it!

I like this narrative style very much. The descriptions of martial arts moves and the use of internal force feel very real. I also love reading anecdotes and allusions about Taoist culture. Good luck, author!

The story is brilliant, it's my favorite type of novel! There is a point in the book about whether the "shrine" can be changed into a sacred toilet, a ghost shrine, or an animal shrine...

Don't be a eunuch, the writing is very good.

It's so well written. Come on, come on.

Keep writing, author, good books will always shine. Come on, finish writing. Come on, write, don't be a eunuch

This is pretty good, it feels a bit like Feng Yu Jiuqiu's work.