White Hair

Well written! Keep it up, author. The writing style is good, indeed similar to Jiu Qiu's "The Broken Robe." The story is also good; it's rare to find an author with such patience these days. Some things need time to mature, and the same goes for writing. Just focus on finishing it patiently. I'm giving it four stars because it's not finished yet. Keep it up!

This book is similar to Jiuqiu's tattered robe, mainly based on Taoism, and I like it very much.

I'm not an expert in this field, but I still want to share my opinion. After carefully reading your question and thinking about it for a long time, I actually don't know how to answer it. As I said at the beginning, I'm not an expert in this field.

I think it's better than *The Broken Robe*! The characters' personalities and thoughts are very reasonable, and the plot is full of positive energy without feeling contrived. 👍 The author's language is fluent and concise, expressing himself perfectly, making it a light and natural read, unlike Jiu Qiu's works where the protagonists' personalities and styles are rather dull. Keep up the good work, author!

I really like this narrative style. The descriptions of martial arts moves and the use of internal energy feel very realistic. I also love reading the anecdotes and stories about Taoist culture. Keep up the good work, author!

The story is captivating, just my type of novel! There's just one thing: could the "shrine" in the book be changed to a sacred toilet, a ghost shrine, or even a shrine for animals...?

Don't abandon this story, it's very well written.

That's really well written! Keep it up!

Keep writing, author! Good books always shine. Keep going and finish it! Keep writing, don't abandon the project!

This is not bad, it feels a bit like Feng Yu Jiu Qiu's work.