Online Game: Starting with Max Luck

Please forgive me for the slow reading speed. I started reading it a long time ago and am currently at Chapter 161 (I took the time to read it. I fell asleep after reading it late and did not finish the latest chapter in the series). I also read it more carefully (because I like to read it more). I would like to give the author a big suggestion. Don't turn the online game into a different world (Future World online games will become bad if you change the different world). Later, you can use Super A super powerful game production team uses independently developed high-tech servers to fill the sky and cannot find this pitfall (after all, people who are not from game companies cannot understand the technology of game equipment) (The protagonist's team is very powerful in real life, so the game team can be even more powerful, but the game production team does not participate in the game, and the game content still needs to be developed and maintained by the production team)

Very good. I think the protagonist's talent can be upgraded. After all, when reality and the game are integrated later, the protagonist will definitely need a partner, and then his Lone Ranger talent will be useless.

This novel tells a story about a male protagonist, two stories, and an author who must send him a razor blade... Highly recommended! The novel I read in two days and two nights must drag you into a trap. You will cry together, laugh together, feel uncomfortable together, and be excited together. How can I bear it alone? Let's do it together, babies [Cool]

The concept is good and gives a lot of imaginative pictures. I recommend it.

The early stage is indeed very beautiful! Although compared with other online game articles, there are less complicated things, but there are many explosive points, and the food that should be eaten is still very full! In the later period, it seems that I have been following the routine of other articles and there is nothing new... I hope the author will get better and better as he writes more! Write your own style!

After reading the last chapter, the author's imagination is really amazing. There are many pitfalls. When I read the last chapter and found out these pitfalls, it was actually very exciting to turn my head. Thank you to the author😀😌😌

Although it's a bit cliche, it's still pretty good-looking.

The writing is good, the concept is novel, and the protagonist and characters are well constructed. Based on this, let me share my opinions: 1 I feel that the game level system is a bit confusing, and not only the protagonist, but also the supporting characters level up a bit too fast. 2. The protagonist's leveling up and downgrading from time to time always makes me a little bit flustered (it's a cool novel after all, so I feel like this is a bit, forget it, forget it, it's necessary for the plot, it's just that I'm a little distracted by it) 3 It is true that there is some ambiguity between multiple heroines and single heroines. It's just that the emotional lines in the article are a bit confusing, especially from the landlord, who looks very sad. (For example, just after experiencing a family blow, and then experiencing... Hurt, such feelings make me, and maybe some of our readers, feel depressed after reading it. So I suggest the author either write more female protagonists, or less emotional lines for other supporting girls, otherwise the protagonist's emotions will collapse) 4 Then there is no more (><) (To be honest, the author is one of the authors who respects readers the most. You have read almost every review I have seen. Thank you again for your efforts)

It's a good novel. I'm quite picky. This one feels really good. The overall structure, characters, and interpersonal relationships are all relatively real. It's not like some books where the characters are written randomly and are divorced from reality.

Overall it's pretty good, but the description of some details isn't very clear. Thanks to the author.