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The psychological stability, character creation, and plot details have all improved significantly compared to the beginning. I hope it will continue to work and give us readers a beautiful wonderland shared by thousands of immortals.

The writing is really good and conscientious, and it is in line with the concepts of the Chinese people. A lot of fantasy garbage written now is dead. Cultivation novels should focus on Qi training, foundation building, Nascent Soul, loose immortality, ascension, and immortality cultivation.

It's very good. It's one of the best novels about pure immortality that I've read recently.

It's so well written, it really led me to read this book. It's just that the update is a bit slow, but I don't want it to end hastily like Lingding Xianyuan.

Because it looks great, I give it five stars.

In a novel about cultivating immortals set in ancient times, now that the unit of meter appears is strange, I wonder what the editor thinks? ? I have read a hundred or two hundred novels, but I have never seen such a long-winded novel about water. I wish I had to write several chapters about the hero pooping, describing the shape, color, softness and hardness of the poop [rolls eyes]

I have been reading novels for nearly ten years, and I still recommend "The Story of a Mortal's Cultivation of Immortality" as my top novel. Although this book may have a dragging plot, overall it portrays the gradual growth process of a mortal in a profound way. Especially those psychological descriptions are very important. We readers are all mortals, and we have a strong sense of immersion and identification in reading, which is worthy of praise. But from the overall layout, the plot development is still slow. And you can feel from the lines that the author is still a newcomer. If he can keep improving, he will definitely have a place as a heavyweight author in the world of cultivation novels!

It's a good novel. I like to read how resources are not so easy to obtain, and how they are improved after obtaining them. It gives people a feeling of excitement, rather than becoming invincible in one step 👍👍👍

The writing is very good. The protagonist carefully and carefully steps from a mortal to a cultivator. I really like this style of novel.

This is a masterpiece that I read about Mortals Cultivation to Immortality and the Queen of Immortals. It's good to read, but the update is a bit slow. I look forward to the author's follow-up.

This is the second very good novel about cultivating immortality after "The Story of a Mortal Cultivating Immortality"!

It's a very good novel about cultivating immortals. The protagonist's character is also very good. He is neither a merciful good man nor an evil villain. The character is well developed.

It's really good. After reading this book, it's no longer interesting to read other books. Hope the update will be faster!

It's very beautiful, not wordy or ink-stained, it's written very clearly, and it's very literary and logical. After more than 1,000 chapters, it became really boring to read. I started reading chapters 1 to 1,000, which was pretty good.

The update is too slow, but the more I read it, the more excited I am. It's a rare and good book.

I think it is a very good novel. I hope it can be updated soon.

It's quite good. Although there are many shortcomings in terms of cultivation performance, plot arrangement, etc., The story is serious and written with care. I hope the author will continue to improve in writing and make this book of higher quality. I look forward to the follow-up of the book.

This is one of the most exciting cultivation novels I have ever read. I hope the author will continue to update it! The priority is also clear, but it's too long-winded. It's only half of the Qi training period = more than a hundred chapters, and a game is only ten or twenty chapters. If it is written about overcoming the tribulation and ascending, and then becoming an immortal emperor and becoming a saint. Then it's worth no more than nine hundred and ninety-nine thousand nine hundred and ninety-nine chapters. How pathetic!

It's very interesting. Unlike other fantasy novels, there is no heroine after reading it all.

The writing is very good and careful, and it's in place, but it's not finished yet. I feel bad waiting for the continuation every day.

The writing ✍🏻 is not bad, it's not that Golden Elixir and Nascent Soul are everywhere, it's not that upgrading is as simple as eating and drinking, it's that the updates are too slow and too infrequent. There are too few updates to read. I look forward to 10 chapters every day with the stroke of a magic pen! One chapter is too short. The four chapters you wrote are not as long as one chapter of the novel written by others. Why

It's very beautiful. I hope there will be more updates in a day. Come on, the author!

A very pure novel about cultivating immortals. Keep paying attention and hope that the follow-up will be more exciting.

Very beautiful. This is the best novel I have ever read.

The content is rich, ups and downs, wonderful and endlessly memorable.

Come on. I'm halfway through it, and although it has some minor flaws, it's still very good overall! I can't bear to catch up with you for updates!

This book is very good! I like it, I hope the author will update it soon.

After reading Chapter 17, it feels much more reasonable if soul piercing is added. Many words are a bit abrupt coming from a child's mouth; but the author has persisted in writing for so long, so I still support it.

It's a good novel. I hope the author can update it more. I'm tired of waiting to read it.

Although the writing style is average, it stands out in the thousands of time travels and system flows. I started to work hard for myself. Although there were adventures in the later period, the writing was pretty good. It's just that some places are not explained carefully. I think it's pretty well written. [Smile][smile][smile]