Xuanhuan: I Became the Villain Chosen by Fate

I am the author of this book. I am building a suite of buildings here. If you want to participate, the form is as follows Name Gender Ability Experience I will choose the best.

It starts well after a few dozen chapters. It's rare for a villain in a story to have a son of luck with an IQ. . . The female guide is a bit fast, and the whole story is not detailed enough. It would be better if there were more psychological descriptions and dialogues.

It's great. I've recently become obsessed with villain novels. The villain is invincible. The plot is also very good. This book has many female protagonists, including Zi Piaomiao, Donghuang Honglian, Lou Xianyue, Ji Xuanhuang, Ye Weiyang, Ye Weiai, Fuyao ( Kunpeng), Xiaobai (nine-tailed fox), Tantai Yuyi, Mu Yuan'er, Princess Xingmu, Ji Jiu'er, Gong Qingyan, Qin Yaoyao, Ye Mingyue (Ye Leng's sister), Nezha (can't bear to start), Xiao Ling'er, Shen Xi, Zi Jade, Zi Lingyan (mother and daughter, not related by blood), Lian Yu (young master of Lian Dao Immortal Palace), Wen Qingluo, Luo Jiuxian, Xi Yue Immortal Emperor (master and apprentice), Qin Youlan, Wu Junling, Wu Shengxian, Wu Mulan, Wu Qianjing, Wu Bingbing, Huan Hongyan (Zi Lingyan's master), Yuan Xianxian, etc. I may have forgotten the others, but these are the ones I can think of, hahaha (ಡωಡ)hiahiahia

The main reason is that the pace is too fast, which makes me feel overwhelmed. It would be better to add more action or psychological description of the characters. When reading this book, sometimes it feels very abrupt. Why does the protagonist accomplish this thing inexplicably and win people's hearts inexplicably. Generally speaking, it is feasible. I think the style and other aspects are very consistent with the villain. It can also be said that the three views are very positive.

To give you some motivation, I hope you will continue to work hard. As long as you write boldly, we will boldly read it, make bold comments and give five-star praise.

The protagonist is not a virgin, he kills decisively, has a harem, and may have a heroine (he has a fiancée who is Destiny's daughter, but I'm not sure if she is the heroine). The protagonist is strong but there is almost no fighting description in the whole text. What I see now is that the protagonist is in the game. The Destiny's luck is not zero and cannot be killed. Oh, then cripple, the luck is zero, oh, then kill instantly.

It's very beautiful, but I don't know why no one sees it. I personally like it more, and the author gives it a thumbs up.

It's rare to find a villain novel that doesn't end badly [face covering]

Very good! Seriously, this is one of the best villain stories I've ever read! Fast pace, beginning and end. Although there are many pitfalls that have not been filled, there are many things in life that have no ending. The pace is very good! I also like to read harem stories. It lacks some language and descriptions of the contact between the male and female protagonists and people. This is something that can be improved! Everything else is great! Very nice! Support the author! Come on!

It's a very good book with great text. Every time I see a woman, I almost bring disaster to her. Every now and then, there are wheels hitting my face. I like it very much. There are multiple female protagonists at the same time, which is very suitable for my viewing needs. The cool text system adds IQ online plots and harem stories. It is recommended to watch.