Starting Out as the Unforgiven

As a bookworm with eight years of experience, I personally feel that this book is quite good and worth reading.

It's really good-looking. The author's writing style is very good, but some of the soy sauce characters have too many scenes. Personally, I think if you don't accept it, I won't return it anyway.

Yes, but you can add other hero templates to the protagonist appropriately. Maybe the author has a plan, but I still want to mention it to you. The overall novel is very smooth and will not give people an awkward feeling. However, the main line is a bit unclear, maybe because there are too few chapters. However, I still hope that the author can write the main line. It seems good now, but I don't know where to go next. ヽ('⌒´メ)ノ, It's a good book, the author, please keep writing.

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Emmm... It's pretty good-looking. It feels like a harem.

The writing style is smooth, the text is delicate, the main line is clear, and the feelings are sincere. I like the writing style very much, especially the special, well, how should I say it? Anyway, as long as you like it very much

Very nice. Just a little bit less. I think there may be a dual personality. The protagonist's decisiveness in killing is also a pistachio in normal times. The author writes very well. I hope the author will update it soon, come on!

Good! Really good! The system rewards characters with skills and moves in League of Legends. Natural and smooth integration with the plot. Since the protagonist used the character panel of Orphan Suo first, pretending was inevitable. . . However, the number of water characters is not so obvious, you can take a look. I've read Chapter 129 so far, and I haven't seen any major flaws. After reading the entire book, I was surprised that the rating for a good book was less than 9! ? And those that are full of loopholes and have mismatched prefaces and subtitles actually have a score of nine points! How ridiculous!

Well, it's a very nice book, and the writing is relatively smooth. It's a book that suits my taste. Even though the protagonist's strength improves a bit too quickly, there are no major setbacks. (Gu Qingying should not be counted. I hope it can give Lu Qingying a miracle...) I hope the author can give the protagonist more permanent identity cards, otherwise Yasuo will be a bit boring. Finally, I hope the author can write better and better.

I prefer the author's writing style, and the plot is also unique. Although it is not novel, it is not cliché. The details are also well controlled, and the system does not frequently cause a sense of presence. The emotional control is very good, the character creation is also quite successful, and the plot design is also very good. It does not blindly cater to the readers. There are no plots and characters that insult the IQ and are silly. It is worth looking forward to. Finally, the author,,,,,, urged me to update more, it's not enough, ah ah ah ah ah