The Heavenly Dao Exposes the Xuanhuan World: I Can No Longer Hide My Dual Pupils

The very first chapter introduces the idea that double pupils are the greatest physique in all time? Double pupils are strong, but does he even deserve the title of greatest physique in all time?

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I hope the protagonist will take in more women. He's always alone, without any power or influence, just a maid. He seems very lonely. I hope the protagonist can create a powerful group of exceptionally talented women, or a group of wives. Please recommend this to the author, thank you.

I'm starting to think making a living as a web novelist is incredibly lucrative. One ranking list, and everyone's shocked—that's one chapter. Then rewards are distributed, leveling up is another chapter, and after that, the next ranking list appears. Seeing the rankings in the comments section, all in groups of 50, I'm truly speechless.

What kind of ridiculous ranking system is this for Immortal Emperors? Rat level? Cat level? It's completely baffling. Why don't you just use the twelve zodiac animals to create twelve levels for the Immortal Emperor realm? Then subdivide each zodiac level into twelve layers, and then further subdivide each layer into early, middle, late, and peak stages.

Everyone in the world knows that the Dao Yi Holy Land possesses that Immortal King Technique, yet no one is trying to seize it? The top-ranked Quasi-Immortal level technique on the early Talent Ranking reward list immediately attracted two Supreme Beings to fight over it. This is utterly outrageous.

I've subscribed, and it feels really weak. Every time the rankings come out, it starts from tenth place and slowly climbs to first. I guess this book will soon be replaced by something else. Let's just part ways amicably.

The fight scenes in your book aren't exciting at all. You didn't even explain the protagonist's double pupils' abilities; you just wrote "born from destruction." Even the Sharingan in Naruto and other anime have their own abilities, but your description of the double pupils feels like it has nothing at all. When the protagonist fights, you only briefly mentioned them; you should at least have described the grandeur of the fight scenes and the supernatural powers!

The rankings and rewards could clearly be written together. It was deliberately split to reach the word count, and a bunch of people's nonsense was added. A single list of successful candidates could fill several chapters; it's incredibly bloated.

Damn it, I can't find a free one.