Honghuang: I Am Shichen

The protagonist of this book is like a treasure-giving boy, or rather, a doting nanny, acting as if the world can't function without him. The more you read, the more speechless you become.

Nanny, what a damn nanny, giving away innate spiritual treasures and top-grade innate spiritual roots to people with no relation to her.

This is utterly absurd. Two chaotic demons discussing the Tao Te Ching is like two academicians debating how to solve a first-grade elementary school problem, and they're doing it with great enthusiasm. If you can't write a proper discussion, don't write it down. Your writing just makes it laughable.

The main character is nowhere to be seen for 70% of the content, which makes it feel increasingly... **

That's really awesome! The author's righteousness is evident in his direct and complete explanation of the origins of everything in the primordial world. If Heaven had not given birth to you, the world would have been plunged into eternal darkness!

If you can't write, then don't write. What kind of garbage is this? How many chapters is this? Look at what you've written! You keep writing sermons; do you want to become a disgrace to the past? Stop writing!

Author, I suggest you reread your previous articles in their entirety. The later major chapters, starting with the Imperial Tribulation and the Lich Tribulation, have become disconnected from the earlier content and contradictory. The settings for various magical artifacts and spiritual roots, and their owners, are becoming increasingly confusing.

When did the Path of Immortality, the Path of Demons, and Life become one of the Ten Great Laws? Shouldn't they be: Time, Space, Destiny, Cause and Effect, Chaos, Reincarnation, Destruction, Yin and Yang, Creation, and Order? The Path of Immortality and the Path of Demons are not laws, but merely traditions.

Some of my apprentices are too unruly; without rules, there can be no order. I suggest we discipline one of them to improve his temperament.

This time-lapse technique is truly the biggest flaw.