Pokemon: From the Start, Taking Stock of Ash's Legendary Pokemon Connections!

The content is a bit sparse, but the characters are pretty good at this stage. It's not like some review novels, where you take stock of Xiaozhi but dislike Xiaozhi at the same time, and write purely based on Xiaozhi's reputation. Waiting for update

Xiaoxia's feelings for Xiaozhi are a bit inexplicable. Xiaoxia only fell in love with Xiaozhi after traveling for a long time. Here, she immediately fell in love with Xiaozhi just when she saw Mirai traveling with Xiaozhi on the screen. It was too deliberate.

Are you sure that the person named Luo is not a time traveler?

Who is Ron? Traveler or local? So? You go to eat history

The first two chapters were okay, especially the Phoenix King chapter. They deleted the scene where Ash complained about Charmander and Charizard saved the villain. However, it was wrong to delete the second point where the villain obtained props and talked about searching for the path in his heart. This was inappropriate. As for the rest of it, it didn't work.

It's too watery. Reduce the word count. Wouldn't it be nice to have more main lines? This is consistent with the brainless cool article

Don't be like everyone else, changing into a eunuch from time to time

Taking stock of the common problems of literature, I found that the plot of the world is not promoted, and there are so many rewards that are not used. It's quite funny.

It's too ink-stained. I feel like I can't climax if I do this. I can't help but comment after reading Chapter 14. Alas...

Giving elf eggs is okay, but is it too much to give to mature living elf? They have minds of their own and should not be given out as rewards! I really like this book and have been waiting for the update, but this chapter made me a little disappointed. It feels like other books. It is said verbally that elves are partners of humans and should be protected and respected, and then turns around and gives away elves as rewards. It is really ridiculous!