Wuxia: Working for the Six Fan Gate

The biggest flaw of this book is that there is a useless master and a useless junior brother. The protagonist is completely like Voldemort. It would be fine if Lao Xing really saves the protagonist. He can always worship him like a father. The key is that Lao Xing has a deep understanding of the protagonist. There was no great favor at all, it was just to recruit the protagonist into his army at the beginning. In this way, the protagonist completely turned into the grandson of Lao Xing in the whole plot, and he had to devote all his efforts to win over Xiaoliu, his junior brother, and even use the precious marrow cleansing pill. . .

Yan Xiaoliu is not a good person. He becomes arrogant when he is proud. He shows no mercy when he punishes Lao Xing. He suppresses Lao Xing

When writing this work, the author probably didn't have any brains

The protagonist Phoenix Blood plus the entire Long Yuan cannot defeat the opponent's Grand Master Nakola Kao.

I was going to read it, but someone in the book review said that it is understandable to accept three apprentices. It is understandable to accept Tongtong. Even if you accept Mo Xiaobei, who does not know the depth at all, he can only cause trouble all day long. He can cause trouble without martial arts. With martial arts, you can't stir up troubles. If you accept the bad guy Long Xiaoyun, there is no need to read this book. Even if you don't kill the bad guy Long Xiaoyun, you will feel sorry for the readers. If you accept him as a disciple, many people will not read it.

Halfway through the movie, the protagonist came up with a nameless skill and gave it to a bunch of people. He didn't even think of treating his friend Hua Manlou's eyes.

There is only one talented person like Ah Fei in the world. Unless Lin Xianer has that 100% loyal magic medicine, he is just a bomb. Have you read the original work? It's like your life and death talisman is unsolvable. The life and death talisman is just the use of yin and yang. Lin Xian'er is born cheap and can fall in love with anyone. Although Long Xiaoyun was a little frustrated, he got better after abolishing martial arts. Lin Xian'er is too sexy. As long as she doesn't die, she will give in.

Why are the system novels of Shelter stuck to the ground? It can be modified infinitely, so why not renovate the spaceship? Is there a forbidden air formation? Die in heaven? If the earth is not saved, then we can't develop in the universe? Isn't it a system? Isn't it infinite transformation?

The protagonist has never been domineering enough, I personally don't like it

The author writes that she likes the protagonist, but she is not lenient at all in planning to kill the protagonist. The protagonist would have died long ago without temporary system upgrades. She has always been the only one who planned the civil strife in the Ming Dynasty to kill each other. The protagonist's side has always only passively counterattacked, without attacking Meng Yuan. The protagonist could have killed her, so that Meng Nali would have no worries. He had been scheming against the protagonist, but he forced her to live for ** chapters. I didn't watch the rest of it, and was caught.