Prince of Tennis: The Strongest Coach

Nanjiro is Ryoga's uncle, not his father. Didn't the author watch the anime? Calling him "father" feels so out of place.

That's weird. You've made all the main characters from the original story your disciples. Who are you trying to impress? That's pointless. It would be more interesting to make a few peripheral characters your disciples and have them compete with the main characters.

Shiraishi Kunizo, Kogane Kuniichi

Tezuka was a first-year student who shut out Sanada and 61 Yukimura; his skills were excellent back then. Later, he got injured, and while others improved, he regressed. You're telling me Fuji's talent is stronger than Tezuka's? Go check Baidu Encyclopedia. Tezuka's talent was the strongest among the selected players of that generation.

It's not good that you have to pay extra.

Don't you need to repair the cracked walls and dented ground of the dojo?

Hopefully, the focus will be on the competition and the students' affairs, and there won't be any female protagonists involved.

Shiraishi Elementary School? Kintaro must have just started elementary school.

As for the novel, it's only so-so. The level of tennis skill becomes increasingly chaotic, especially during the national tournament. It's as if other countries don't know how to teach the Light Shot, and even near-world-class players are intimidated by it. Also, the characters' ages are inconsistent.

It's one thing to deal with other high school students, but to portray Kiboroin, Phoenix Tanegashima Shuuji as so weak is just ridiculous.