The Swordsman General of the Pirate World

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The most annoying underage protagonist

The main character is written as if he is mentally retarded

I quite liked the previous one. When I saw the Dragon Man in the White House, I was really excited.

I've worn it for so many years in vain.

You said the feelings are deep, right? Traveling for so long without any planning resulted in the death of my adoptive mother. You could say the feelings are weak. I'm talking about it in the first two chapters

It's outrageous that all of this author's novels have been ghostwritten.

The eunuch is the one who wrote quite well. Alas, I will burn incense when I come back. The author was also a decent person during his lifetime.

The three disasters are comparable to the generals, and the Warring States Garp combined can't win it, which I didn't expect.

What's the first one for? I don't understand why. In order to subdue a knife, why would you rub it on your neck? Is this what you want to express? Do you want to show your trust in the knife, or do you want it to feel pity for you and be willing to follow you? I feel like this protagonist is too **? The knife you just drew, you said a few words about taking it to the top, and then you wiped it on your own neck? Shouldn't you show your courage and your swordsmanship? It's really poisonous

This is a pirate, not a Hokage. Armed Haki has both age and physical requirements. A 13-year-old swordsman... Is also proficient in dual-color Haki. It's too poisonous.

I didn't want to watch it when I saw one about the navy. Pirates are the highlight of this anime. Pirates yearn for adventure and freedom, and the Devil Fruit in it is what makes it attractive. If you write about the navy, there will be no adventure and freedom.

Bandit King Ax King Mengka Dadan (*head)

There is a height requirement for admirals, at least 3 meters. As a candidate for admiral, Momo Usagi is also about 3 meters tall. The protagonist must be at least 2 meters 3 or above. In One Piece, if you are below 2 meters, you are basically "disabled"

It feels average. Many settings are not explained well. For example, if all the things are placed on the raft, will it not shake when a shark hits it? If it is placed on the edge like this, it will fall. Even people may not be able to stand firmly. It is better to have a storage space to put things (since there is such a thing as time travel to survive, then the storage space is not excessive). The raft is set so that it will not shake greatly.

I just want to say, Haijun doesn't even read newspapers! ! ! The newspapers have reported it, but the Navy Admiral still doesn't know? ? Do you think the naval intelligence department is ***? ! What retarded logic! ! !

What's the use of this system? If you kill someone, some will explode, and some won't.

Moria paid great attention to his companions before challenging Kaido

From the first chapter, it can be seen that the author is a shabi.

Didn't it say that devil fruits can be exploded? In three hundred chapters, no Devil Fruit power was revealed.

Don't be a 12-year-old who knows everything in the East China Sea and has never been to the sea, okay? Even if I know, you can still pretend.

But I have a question, how is this physique calculated? It makes me very confused.

A top swordsman plus two-color domineering equals a second lieutenant? Are you stupid? The great swordsman and the two-color domineering force can barely fight against the elite lieutenant general? I'm convinced, get out of the trap

What should be regarded as bad and must be regarded as appropriate*?

The author's writing of the four emperors is so useless

If Pangu didn't incarnate, where did he come from in the ancient times? Where did Sanqing come from?

He stepped on the lieutenant general for half a year and punched the four emperors for a year.

But the quality is quite high. The author is an old man.

Sometimes it cuts and sometimes it freezes. I don't understand the author's idea. Pure swordsmanship with all the bells and whistles is very low-level, okay?

After I beat Auntie, I guess I started ghostwriting. The character of the protagonist has changed.