Peak of Hokage's Eye Technique

The writing is very messy, and I was fascinated by it. Sometimes the scene jumps suddenly, and the language expression is not very clear. The plot concept is okay, but the writing still needs practice.

I wonder if you have noticed that Naruto fan fiction likes to write Shiro as a female and then include her in the harem? It's like writing about Dongfang Invincible in a martial arts novel. These two are men and are being manipulated by Fei Lu. If you don't write them as men, you won't be allowed to write them. Or did you come here to write them without reading the official introduction?

Many people swear by so-called evidence that they don't know where to make up, and they say that Bai is a female. This is very inaccurate, because there is no official formula book that has ever said that he is a female, and the gender is clearly written as "male".

I've seen many female protagonists writing about Bai. Please, Bai is a boy. He's trying to fuck Billy.

What a **protagonist. What the hell is this **protagonist?

Why can't you open the Eternal Sharingan to fully form Susanoo?

Author, Bai is a male in the author's original work

Brother, please don't insult the killer, okay? I think Super Killer is a fantasy killer for nerds. The killer is a kind of mercenary who never has companions. Have you read any novels similar to The Killer?

Have you never watched Naruto? Or is the author a g?

Author, do you have common sense?

Talking nonsense

Shiro is a boy, and look at how old Shiro was when Zabuza fell in love with him.

Martial arts is divided into nine levels, and if eight is the lowest and one is the highest, how can it be divided into nine?

You can do this one, just use the exclamation mark to make up the number of words, it's a cheat

At first I thought it was okay, but then I really didn't know what I was writing! Don't look, don't spend money

In the early stage, the protagonist was made to be even more genius than Madara, but after seeing the complete Susan, Tsunade would break out in a cold sweat. It was so unbelievable.

Are you going to fight with bayonets this time?

Ben and Hashirama Yuri protagonist, funny

You're pretending not to know the plot again, eh

Bai must have appeared in the previous episodes. I don't know Bai's situation.

What is the pupil technique of the Mangekyo Sharingan? You the protagonist.

What the fuck is so useless

It's fine in the front, but it's getting weirder and weirder in the back.

There is a duplicate chapter in Chapter 316

What nonsense did you write?

Commentary on Chapter 153: Preparing to Evacuate in "The Peak of Naruto's Eye Technique" written by Kyoka Suigetsu.

Chapter 150 and onwards are all random writing. If you don't believe me, go read it.

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Commentary on the chapter "Child in the Snow" written by Kyoka Suigetsu in "The Peak of Naruto's Eye Technique".

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