One Piece: The Marines' Legend

I only know Lieutenant General Flying Squirrel, I have never heard of Lieutenant General Hamster.

Taking away the man will change the plot, but taking away the woman will not change the plot? Is this the author?

If you want to end the era of extreme evil, you must kill the Luffy pirates. Don't tell me that Luffy and the others are adventurers. Didn't Roger start the era of great pirates? Luffy also has this ability.

There are still fewer colors of thunder. In addition to red thunder and black thunder, there can also be green thunder, gold thunder, silver thunder and even gray thunder. Red thunder symbolizes killing, black thunder symbolizes destruction, green thunder symbolizes judgment, gold thunder symbolizes strength, silver thunder symbolizes chaos, and gray thunder symbolizes nothingness. In this way, the protagonist can go further.

The sentences are not very fluent and there are many typos!!!

Is this a novice?

It seems like it won't be finished and the plan can't keep up with the changes. It's really troublesome**

The writing style is not very good and needs to be polished. There are many errors in details... You also need to pay attention to it.

Many typos and improper sentence separation

Write a running account? No sense of immersion at all