One Piece: The Dark Emperor

I think the protagonist should absorb the Shock Fruit and become a dual-power person like Blackbeard in the original work. The destructive power of the Dark Fruit's hegemonic energy alone is not enough

The Dark Fruit cannot be elementalized, but it can absorb damage, although the pain is doubled, which you didn't even mention here. How to write a book

Isn't Vanderdeken dead? Why is he back?

Yesterday, I used Ming Ge's steps and Kizaru's expression, imitated Smoker's smoking, went to the principal's office, and said "Give me face and be my son" using the lines of white beard and red hair. Later, there were red-haired arms, Aokiji's legs, Fujitora's eyes, and Blackbeard's teeth.

Is Fujitora that weak? He was a general in the original work!

It's understandable that the original work needs to be adapted to a younger age When you write fan fiction, can't you use your brain a little from an adult perspective? The hot-blooded novel is really funny and does not make up for the big and small units A full blow? How much force is this? How many Newtons of force? Fruit ability cannot be quantified? Physical strength has no unit to measure? How much physical strength can exert how much fruit ability? Compared with lower fruits, upper fruits are more powerful and consume more energy? How many? Does conceptual ability require more physical strength, and are there limitations? Otherwise, everyone with abilities will be invincible! Fruit awakening? How to awaken? What is the degree of fruit development? Is there a standard measurement method? Three colors of domineering? Don't you think there is no unit of measurement for middle, high or top level?

Who is strong and who is awesome in the world of pirates? If you have strength, you will have money. One Piece's treasures and history are meaningless.

Authors of pirate novels should not write so childishly. The world of pirates is dark, and it is pointless to ask about what history is. The so-called One Piece is not an anime like Roger. He should be the strongest snobbery in the sea, or a king. Pirates actually also compete for hegemony in time. Don't write childishly. His firm belief is just like the character of Luffy in the original work. If he died a hundred times in the real world, the reality is not that if you can't beat him, you can win with firm belief in the end. The reality is that if you can't beat him, you can retreat first or run away and fight back later. Otherwise, you will really die if you die.

I have been the Pirate King for more than ten years, and the results tell me that Luffy's fruit is actually an animal type.

The author reads with me: Starting today, it will never be updated. I will not watch dramas, travel, or get sick. I will play no games, no hydrology. I will burst into words, life and death. I am the keyboard in the dark, the guard on the Great Wall of Internet; I resist the cold and endure the scorching heat, and I dedicate my life and glory to the code words at dawn, today and tomorrow.