The Asura White Tiger of the Seas
航海里的修罗白虎
- Status
- Ongoing
- Length
- 1.1M Words
- Genre
- Fanfiction
- Subgenre
- Anime Fanfiction
- Updated
- 1y ago
- Source
- Faloo
Synopsis
All-time: Reads, Flowers.
532Chapters
7.5MReads
67.3kFlowers
10.0Score
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I felt so frustrated when I watched it in the early stages, and the main character was too weak.
I don't like this kind of opening very much. If you have been a soldier under someone for a long time, you will get used to obeying. It is better to lay the foundation on a desert island from the beginning. People's hearts are complicated. Then it will be suppression, wooing, and assassination. You will be forced to be a spy, and you will be forced to be a gun. Even if it is a beautiful boss, I don't like this kind of opening. There are too many constraints.
It's been more than a hundred chapters and I'm still fighting the rebels. I'm laughing so hard.
Start applying patches at the beginning to find a reasonable explanation for the protagonist's weakness. There won't be so many increases in the future. Now that you can't even compare to Lucci, you start applying weakening patches. The protagonist is 13 years old, and how many years has it been since Luffy debuted and fought against the Five Old Stars? I guess your protagonist won't be able to defeat the Yonko even at 18, so he wants to be more skillful, right? I'm sorry I don't have time to read your stupid shit. The boss writes a book with a short timeline but a sufficient story. When a parallel importer writes a book, he can't write anything. He can only suppress the growth of the protagonist and follow the plot line. Is it necessary to write about fruitful abilities like this? Think about it for yourself if you compare the results of the original work to whether your White Tiger is just a ****. If you upgrade and add some indistinguishable writing methods, you are afraid that the protagonist will be too strong. It is better to write an online game.
It's really water, and I haven't even finished writing twenty or thirty chapters yet. Why do those ants have to write it in such detail? Even if it is water, it doesn't need to be this water, no wonder there are no people there. Keep going like this. Not even interested in doing it. Go faster, you're really good at water
It's too long. The fruit was quite enjoyable at first, which is in line with the power of the fantasy beasts, but it got dragged out later when it went berserk. Also, the kingdom chapter was too long.
Chapter 20 and haven't finished yet? Now I just glance at the chapter title and stop reading.
How can I put it, the tiger's claws are the most suitable weapon. I think the animal type does not really need additional weapons.
It's so boring, I'm still writing original works now
The growth rate of Smelted Devil Fruit has been reduced. . There are only a few thousand Devil Fruits in the world, and they are collected by the Celestial Dragons and kings of various countries who are not short of money. Excluding the unborn ones, it is estimated that there are less than a few hundred in circulation at the same time in an era. This is Pirates, not a small map like Hokage, this is a big country with tens of millions of people. Calculated this way, there are actually fewer people with Devil Fruit abilities than there are modern lottery jackpot winners. The improvement you make by melting one person feels like killing two people.