One Piece: The Dark Crown

Devil fruits are afraid of sea water, not fresh water

Does anyone have any good Naruto and Pirates fan fiction? I beg you.

Why don't you read that mentor's book????

I think this and Evil General are the two best pirate fics. Although the ending of The General is too delayed. This book is not perfect until the end

It was too dark and depressing later on

He was worried that he would be discovered by the Warring States Period, and was also worried that he would be brainwashed and rebel. After decades of fighting with the air, he did not perform well in the end. He neither delivered any important information nor stabbed a key person in the back. He suffered in vain. Wouldn't it be useful to keep a general-level combat power for himself?

The first part is good, but the second part is not so good.

Shaoqing changed the place, which is composed of the character "qi" and the character "braille".

It's a pity that your book now uses various settings updated by One Piece at this stage. Your book is definitely another masterpiece. Dover, the penetrating details you portrayed have come to life.

The author writes so carefully. The protagonist is very attentive to many details, much better than many time-travelers. The control is very good. In the past, those who said they had seen the plot and didn't know anything got angry when they saw it. It's so cool to watch the protagonist without any handle.