Age of Discovery: It’s All About Technology and Ruthless Tricks

There is no waste fruit, only waste ability users. It is as nonsense as a certain master said that there is no waste martial soul, only waste soul masters. Jacket Fruit and Thunder Fruit, the latter is opposite the hanging hammer, and the upper limit of pirates is placed on the line fruit like yy. It is impossible to develop lifeline, timeline, causal line and so on.

After reading more than a hundred chapters, I found that the main character is a complete lunatic, with a perverted mentality, a dark and twisted incarnation of extreme evil, and a completely dark text. If you like this type of genre, you can read it. I will leave on my own accord. Please forgive my three views and moral values ​​for not being able to accept it. This type of text has been banned these days.

The first chapter is purely literary. I roughly know what the author wants to write about. But the author's writing power is not strong enough and he can't write it at all. It just feels awkward.

To be honest, the style of this book really doesn't have a large audience. The first is the setting of the protagonist. Let's not talk about the quality of the setting of the fusion of two souls. The character of the protagonist you wrote is really hard to describe. Is it dark? Crazy? Neurotic? I don't know how to describe it, but it's really hard to relate to. In short, it's hard to stand and can't get into it. It's the instructor's book that has won my heart the most, and I have read it twice.

I feel that there is no need for the author to pursue any new ideas. He should go to extremes. Write a normal character. Don't mess around with the mess, such as the fusion of two souls or the dimensional agreement. It's complicated and poisonous, just a simple physical time travel. Don't write too crazy or too crazy characters. Yes, what I'm talking about is that you write Brother Ming and Tang Li in this book. Be normal and write according to the three views of normal people. Also, it feels like you always omit the process of the protagonist becoming stronger? In fact, it can be added appropriately. Upgrading and becoming stronger is a big cool point. If you don't write it down, this cool point will be discarded directly. We can only focus on the plot, but as far as current online novels are concerned, upgrading and becoming stronger will never go out of style. Good writing can not only support a main line, but also add a lot of color. For example, in this book you wrote about the dream factor, some of which are similar to faith? You can set up a path for the protagonist to believe in and become a god, step by step. If this line is written as the main line, it is still attractive.

Although I also hate Yamato, it's a pity to throw Yamato's head into the bucket like this. I just clone Kozuki Oden, move Yamato's brain in, and let him kill Kaido.

Adding bloodline to Sauron really made me vomit! Originally, he was the only one among the protagonists who I felt was clean, but now he is still polluted by Oda, the Shabu! It's also said that the Frost Moon bloodline has not been strengthened by Sauron! With hard work, can you become the deputy emperor at the age of twenty? In the past, there were examples of people who could achieve the rank of Imperial Vice-deputy through hard work without bloodline! What now? If your bloodline is useless, why don't you add me?

The writing is very good, but I can't put it into perspective. I can't be that crazy, even if I don't have a bottom line.

Ever since the mentor's book, Shaoqing's books have gone more and more off track... I don't know what this one is like.

I really like the author's setting of the big dream factor, that is, the protagonist's combat power and the intelligence of the five old stars are a bit...