
Dragon Ball: Awakening Near Death, Ancient Saiyan Bloodline Appears
龙珠:濒死觉醒,远古赛亚血脉现
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- Ongoing
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- 195k Words
- Genre
- Fanfiction
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- Anime Fanfiction
- Audience
- For men
- Updated
- 1d ago
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- Faloo
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It can be seen that the author is very competent, but maybe. . Not suitable for writing online articles? The article is good, but it is very tiring to read. I skip a plot here and omit a section there, which is like a cloud of inertia. Indeed, if you read every word carefully, you can still understand what the author is writing, and you can also see the causes and consequences. However, the plot content of the previous and subsequent chapters is mostly confusing, and the characters appear abruptly. There is a lack of connecting links between scenes. The reader needs to go through the sequence in his mind, and also fill in a considerable part of the plot and scenes, in order to "find" the complete story. This writing method may be suitable for writing some traditional novels with limited length, which can be read repeatedly and chewed slowly, but it is not suitable for very long online novels that are updated in real time and are basically only read once. Of course, this is purely my personal opinion. I think it's a pity that a good article is not good enough. Let me share my thoughts. You are welcome to refute it.