Name: Mizuki Seiko, Starting from the Center and Joining the Club

The ability of the tornado was ruined by the protagonist, or the author was hard-pressed. The scarecrow can completely cover the whole city with telekinesis and directly wipe them out. They have to find and kill them one by one. Candyman can scatter his body, but the protagonist just can't wrap that area with telekinesis. He's also choked by the smoke of the explosion, so he can't build a shield? Just hard water

What the hell? Nanomecha? Do you know what kind of equipment is needed for this thing? With the protagonist's family background, a person who can build a mecha by himself can know how long it takes and how much money it costs. Are you kidding me?

I think if Tongtian is chosen as the reincarnation, the first thing is to defeat the main god and obtain the main god's space, instead of letting others manipulate him.

The author should hire more female protagonists. You have almost 100 chapters and only have one female protagonist.

The writing is okay, but it's just about Dachao's various abilities. The top level is just the Yonko. Don't tell me there are levels on the top level. The setting is a bit bad.

The wrongly written invincible novels basically give the protagonist an adventurer strength of about level 6, which is enough. Plus the protagonist must bring level-breaking challenges. It is meaningless to write you like this, and in the end it changes back to male appearance and gender. The cute king novels are about drawing girls and insisting that you are male. It is too poisonous to write about a boy.

Let Cao Cao look at Cao Yanbing and the guardian spirit Zhuge Liang, look at Zhuge Qing at Longhu Mountain in the snow, and look at the one-person Heavenly Master

When I read Chapter 122, I really couldn't help but feel unhappy. I wonder if the author has any children, or does he have children but doesn't care whether they live or die? Others have to send their children to kindergarten because their parents are too busy at work to take care of their children. It's better for you. In this brain hemorrhage operation, the protagonist has so many people to take care of, and the parents still have no jobs and come to Beijing to take care of your baby. You sent your three-year-old child to a kindergarten to board. Were you on drugs when you wrote this chapter?

Xiaobu! Branch edge! Sister Zhou's role can be reduced, less, it's the same with or without her.

It's a cool subject matter, but the writing is not very good. Every time the protagonist does something, it's been shocking for ten chapters, and I was immediately scared off.

A childhood sweetheart with an unusual family background? I don't believe that the protagonist has no background. After all, this world is very realistic.

I knew it. I lifted it up high and put it down gently.

I see that your previous novels have quite a lot of words.

It's a pity that the author is not very good at playing. He directly kidnapped all the disciples of the sect. (Suppose there are a thousand disciples and twenty elders, as if At the beginning, let the sect leader make his own choice, and he could decide on his own time within one minute. Choose), the sect leader will kill an elder with his own hands or the protagonist will execute fifty disciples. If he chooses to kill the elders with his own hands, fifty disciples will be released. If Kai chooses to kill fifty disciples, the protagonist will execute them himself. The countdown will be recalculated after each choice. If the elder commits suicide, fifty disciples will be executed together with him. The protagonist must manage the chips in his hand well and cast spells to prevent him from moving his hands and feet and from biting his tongue to commit suicide. But the main thing about being able to wail is enjoyment.

This book is already pretty good among nominal fan fictions, why is it rated so low?

Do you want to read the comments or not? Give everyone an explanation. If you don't speak, you will be dumb, right?

I went to Handong to fight decisively. It was very exciting in front of me, and I was decisive and wise. Moreover, Sha Ruijin and the others couldn't be killed. There must be many people writing like this. Let's find another way. Writing like this will definitely kill me!

Steal the battery? I looked back at my cars, Bugatti Veyron, Phantom Rolls-Royce, Venom. Well, I'm relieved

Okay, later is later, as long as you don't forget, that's fine

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Will you join the plot of Gulit ssss?

Come more and get less and less!

Write more about investment. In daily life, even if you are playing with collections or jade, don't pretend to be a slap in the face. It's meaningless. Now we can see that Shuangwen is getting stronger and stronger along the way. Don't come out and provoke the protagonist alone.

Really excellent! Unfortunately, I have no money, so I can only subscribe to a few. Hey-hey.

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I will probably keep following it. It would be better if the updates are faster.

I've been working on some things these days, and I'll start updating everything in a few days.

To be honest, although we all know what Fei Lu's book is like, can the IQ of the supporting characters be a little higher? The ability shown by the protagonist is really offending. You can just find a force that is similar to that hegemony and kill him easily. Even someone with a slight IQ can't be so obvious. It is an invincible novel in itself, and the IQ of the supporting characters is so low. What do you think?

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