Apocalyptic Fictional Worlds: From the Start, Sang Zhi and Her Mother Come Begging for Help

After it was released, they really went all out with the padding! For example, they mentioned receiving 70 tons of frozen goods, repeating it 17 times in one chapter, saying it repeatedly, not 7kg, not 70kg, 700kg, it's 70 tons, a full 70 tons, and they just said it like that. Is that really okay? Isn't that actively driving away potential customers?

The male lead is too weak. The woman asking for help kept babbling on and on, not understanding the situation. The male lead also didn't realize that he was the one who was rescuing her. Couldn't he have just slapped her to bring her to her senses? He should have just told her what supplies he wanted to take, asking for this and that, and even bothering to wear a formal dress and high heels?

Every time I see the author mention superhuman serum, a hundred times stronger than a human, I want to curse. If you're already that scared, what kind of firearms could possibly harm you?

Ugh, too much nonsense. It feels like two-thirds of this chapter is just filler.

(Superman Serum) sounds impressive, but it doesn't actually give you superhuman abilities like a super brain, a body of steel, or the ability to fly.

I think some plot points shouldn't be padded out. 1. Chat room 2. In the latest chapter, there's a line: "Hey, I've come to save you." Are you really here to save me?

Don't have children, okay? If you're going to have children, have girls. You have to understand that your villa will eventually house at least a hundred female characters. Imagine having a boy in there—it's just horrible. People who read too many doujinshi or works about human nature can easily imagine things to death.

It's a bit slow-paced, and over 30% of it is filler! The release was also a bit rushed. The plot and other aspects are generally fine, so overall it's acceptable, though not bad.

With a power a hundred times greater, even the fastest movement speed would be supersonic; they wouldn't be afraid of nuclear bombs. The author's previous villain was also like that, but that book didn't require that hundredfold power. It's clear the author is only interested in writing this kind of action-packed story.

Someone else wrote about this before, and the later developments were inexplicable.