Anime Crossover: The Goddess Chose Me, and I Became the Demon Lord

Everything else is fine, except that the main character is not very likable. The face of the nouveau riche is too obvious

A time traveler should look like a time traveler. Why does he feel like he has been aboriginal? There is no sense of empathy at all.

In addition to a lot of typos, the other thing is that it is obviously a comprehensive comic, and there are so many meters of content. If you want to take advantage of this part of the popularity, either write all the rice, add some ship girls, etc., Or write a good variety comic, and don't write the kind that is less popular. How long has it been in the city of Spirits? There are several comprehensive comics now. No wonder the results are not good. It's not like I have written a hit novel and has a fan base, so I can write such a familiar anime.

Good guy, the hydrogen bomb explosion is seven figures, and the explosion into the city is six figures. So if my hydrogen bomb can't even destroy an entire street, then what is nuclear deterrence?

I used to read more than 100 chapters of this book, but then I stopped reading it. Looking at the comment section now, I saw that in August I started saying not to write about Mijia and I am still writing now. 666, No more acting. Why can't the stove have a blackout function? I can't stand it anymore, so I want to block all authors who like to change their faces like this.

Suo and Vita are not the same person, right?

The first and second books are obviously very good, why is this one a piece of cake?

Although Void Manzo is called the First God Key, that is because the Herrscher core law produced was the first Herrscher to come out. It does not mean that Void Manzo was the first God Key to be made. Void Manzo was the last one to be completed. It seemed that it caused a lot of trouble after it was made...

This Fighter Dragon Ball is almost the same, otherwise I would definitely not choose it.

It was obviously because he wanted to die and wanted to wipe out everything that he let those feudal kings come to the capital to rebel.