Siheyuan: Rising to Power with a Body of Steel

Who is prettier, Bai Ling or Qin Huairu? Bai Ling has a small frame, while Qin Huairu has a large frame. People from the 1950s probably preferred Qin, while modern people prefer Bai Ling's curvaceous figure. One hand with Qin Huairu is fragrant, the other with Qin Huairu is foul and poisonous.

The protagonist, Qin Huairu, is a chicken who can't endure any hardship?? Absolutely not! Look at how other female protagonists, who are "people of iron, food of steel," do it all for their children. Has the protagonist never seen a woman before?

If you're downplaying combat power, don't write about characters like Zod and the Steel Man becoming stronger in just a few days. The older you are, the faster you absorb sunlight and the more you store.

Is Qin a good person? None of the children he raised are good, and he even dragged Sha Zhu down for life, causing him to die childless. A virtuous wife and loving mother? Although Sha Zhu has his own reasons, Qin is nowhere near as good as the word "good."

Seriously? You, Superman with a body of steel, really have the same grotesque tastes as Clark? Just imagine, under your superhuman senses, the filth, odors, parasites, and various inconsistencies in human tissue on ordinary people's bodies. How could you bring yourself to eat them? You're practically a collection of Cthulhu mythos. Are you really just pretending not to see it?

How could someone with a rural household registration look down on someone with an urban household registration?

Speechless. **Do you think this is still the old society?** And this is the capital! There's only one official in the courtyard house, but you've written it as if he could cover up everything? The protagonist's family doesn't even have four members, right? The story starts with damaging the protagonist's house, and the protagonist's relative, Li, can't call the police? Can't they contact a nurse or a government department?

The synopsis is basically a mess: the factory job opportunity was snatched away. He ended up cleaning toilets, then catching enemy agents, rescuing police officers, and becoming a glorious policeman himself. One bloat after another.

When the average income was only a few dozen yuan, you're telling me that the bride price for getting married is two million yuan?

Let's create a space that's like a Qiankun Ring or Qiankun Pearl, containing a spiritual spring world where drinking it leads to longevity, disease prevention, and beauty enhancement. We can also grow some fruits, grains, and medicinal herbs!