Siheyuan: A Heretical Cultivator from the Start? The Whole Courtyard Falls Apart

After looking at it, it's okay, but there are two flaws. First, although the setting is about wearing clothes, the protagonist's face has to be shaped like Xu Damao, which feels a bit strange, because you are involved in the concept of cultivating immortals, and the protagonist himself has certain achievements, so why not just replace the existence? Even if the protagonist uses his original appearance, and then swallows up Xu Damao's existence, in other people's impression, Xu Damao will always look like the protagonist, and others will not feel inconsistent. It is suggested that after the protagonist's cultivation is high, he can slowly change back to his own appearance and cover up other people's impressions of Xu Damao. Second, Chen Xueru mentioned the need for patching, but your method of patching is actually meaningless. The important thing is not the membrane, but whether she has experienced it. She has experienced it. Does it make sense for you to recover afterwards? Isn't this just deceiving one's ears and stealing the bell? . .

To be honest, you authors who write about such a violent courtyard are really unable to imitate other people's writings about Qing Man instead of Qin Man. I have only seen one author in Feilu who writes about Qing Man, the protagonist Li Wuwei.

With this golden finger, I went directly to Southeast Asia to build a garden.

Author, stop writing and read what you wrote? You have refined Xu Damao's body, how can you still feel Xu Damao's weakness? Shouldn't it be a layer of Xu Damao's skin with the protagonist underneath? The settings are incomplete, and you are still cheating, and you are a street boy.

It's outrageous, bro, especially in chapters 124 and 125. I copied and pasted a bunch of club names and canned meat encyclopedias to make up the word count. Is this the way to hurt the hearts of the old friends who subscribe and support you during the Chinese New Year?

Isn't it true that since you were reborn in a new body, you can't use your own appearance and name? Wouldn't it be great if you replaced the original Xu Damao by yourself? What's the difference between making Xu Damao easy and seizing the body? And using Xu Damao's appearance and Lou Zi's bridal chamber is a self-inflicted operation. It's like you pretending to be another man to have sex with your own wife.

Can you also look at the front to see if the author knows what he wants to write? I feel like I was just writing randomly without writing an outline in advance. The main character is like a headless fly with no purpose.

*The mud-horse guy also showed the will of heaven** Author

There's something wrong with your start. When Xu Damao got married, Jia Dongxu was already dead. Xu Damao has been married for almost three years in 1965

There is a lot of competition in Siheyuan, and new ones are uploaded every day. The updates are too slow and it is difficult to get ahead.