
Anime Crossover Chat Group: I'm in Corpse Brother with a Template System
综漫聊天群:人在尸兄,模板系统
- Status
- Completed
- Length
- 474k Words
- Genre
- Fanfiction
- Subgenre
- Anime Fanfiction
- Updated
- 1y ago
- Source
- Faloo
Synopsis
All-time: Reads, Flowers.
138Chapters
2.2MReads
19.6kFlowers
9.3Score
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Reader comments 50
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I don't understand why you have to take that damn fat guy with you. The protagonist also wants to play with Big Bird.
Why forcefully drag a fat man over? Just give him a ride. Isn't it the end of the world?
How can the villagers of Konoha dare to hit Naruto? The animation is just original. In the original manga, no one dares to hit Naruto, and Naruto is not unable to buy things. The animation always likes to increase the intensity to make Naruto miserable. In the original, he has no money to eat and is hungry, so he can only catch fish to eat, he is stoned, no one is willing to sell things to Naruto, etc. In fact, in the original book, the people of Konoha only dare to alienate Naruto with a cold eye, talk behind his back, and no one dares to hit Naruto if he is teased or teased. This technique is very common in Japanese comics. The setting is enlarged to make it appear three-dimensional. Just like Dragon Ball Kame Sennin. In order to increase the lustful setting of Kame Sennin, he always creates some original scenes of eating the tofu of his apprentice and his apprentice's wives and girlfriends. As a result, in the comics, he has never touched the women of his apprentice and apprentice.
Not a brother, senior brother, ghost destroyer, not a brother, are you serious? It's not that I look down on you, but when it comes to combat ability, I'm not even worthy of carrying my shoes.
QCQS, Tushan Susu and Tushan Honghong are not accepted. They actually write the Tushan Susu time period. Unless the protagonist travels through time, Tushan Susu and Tushan Honghong are probably at the beginning of the white month and the beginning of the Eastern month.
I don't know why I want to laugh..., Read his book review introduction.
And if I'm not mistaken, the reason the rating is so low is because part of me hates that fat man, and part of me hates you for not accepting the heroine.
The setting is confusing and the plot is draggy. At the beginning, it is said that the protagonist does not know that he is in the world of Brother Corpse. Later, it is said that the protagonist is related to Bai Xiaofei. Even if the protagonist knows Bai Xiaofei, can't he realize that he is in the world of Brother Corpse? There is also the plot of taking Fatty to the evacuation point after taking the giant tower. The arrangement is also hazy. After taking the giant tower, it is just used once. What is the significance of the arrangement of going to the evacuation point? The protagonist has figured out the golden finger template to upgrade and wants to kill the zombie brother. But if he doesn't upgrade quickly to complete the progress and change to a template to upgrade himself, he turns around and takes a fat man to the evacuation point. At the evacuation point, there are no girls waiting for the protagonist to flirt with, and there is no chance for the protagonist to improve. You have to say that this arrangement is shaping It's not right to add to the protagonist's image and allow the character Fatty to exit in a reasonable manner. When the protagonist wants to leave the evacuation point by himself, you write that Fatty chooses to follow the protagonist and says that he can help the protagonist maintain the weapon. Then let me ask you, what is the meaning of arranging the protagonist to get the magic weapon Juque at the beginning when you write like this? No need to take it, just use the broken Tang knife and the industrial water knife that was handy. Is the role of Juque just as a decoration? Or is it that the weapon you wrote about that requires maintenance after using He Dao for a while and then cutting it for a while is Juque? What's the point of taking the giant tower if it's so fragile? The blood knife that was cut off by the Juque Tang Dao you wrote about was even used to support the collapsed ceiling in Bai Xiaofei's plot. Would the hardness and toughness of the Juque that can cut it be lower than that of the blood knife? In Feilu, it is not popular to have men of equal status around the protagonist, but you still insist on writing it like this, and insist on forcing her to stay with the protagonist by using the setting that Fatty is a descendant of a forging family. I don't even know what the significance of Fatty's character is? The protagonist with the sword has his own template to kill all the way. The maintenance weapon giant is a magic weapon. It is impossible to say that it will be damaged after killing some monsters. When it comes to fighting bosses, just a Jiguoyuan template cannot compare with those masters in Corpse Brother. As for being related to the original protagonist group, it is even more ridiculous. What does Bai Xiaofei have that the protagonist can plot against? Xiaohui can save her from the corpse tide, and the same can be said for the Saint of the Blood Lotus. If you say that you are not very good at screenwriting and stick to the original novel, then you should go out and bump into Bai Xiaofei instead of bumping into a fat man?
See what the author said, don't dismantle the cp. If you don't dismantle it, don't write it. I'll withdraw it first.
So many people are complaining, which proves that there is a problem, and you my friend ~ you should solve the problem instead of letting everyone skip the problem and look at it later! Usually I am stuck here and have no intention of looking back.