Hong Kong Island: Fusing with Steel Bars, I Become Hung Hing’s Ghost Dragon!

In Chapter 25, the protagonist gives his daughter to his younger brother. I understand everything.

Very well written, farm tools should look like farm tools

The book must be written in line with the actual situation. Your knowledge reserve is only level one. I just give you the drawings of the sixth-generation fighter and the construction methods of all parts, but you also have to understand it!

Adding the setting of "sleep" is such a waste of time and background. Why do we have to "sleep" at the beginning and then jump to the beginning of the plot?

It was fine before, but why on your birthday did you turn into a crooked-mouthed dragon king? I thought that a few years ago, fellow kings would turn your writing into an urban slap in the face article.

The loyalty card is a bit awkward. It should be set up so that it can only be used by the protagonist's subordinates in the sphere of influence. Otherwise, it can be used directly by the President of the United States, the Queen of England, the Governor of Hong Kong, or even Jiang Tiansheng. It would be too wasteful to use it directly by the gray *.

Selling *meat by selling sheep's head, the title does not match the content

If you really don't know how to write, don't write novels or anything. It's hard to write novels.

SB author, what did you write?

This should be the great-grandson of the ugly husband, right?