Period Drama: In the Alley, I Flip the Table from the Start

Two failings of this book The first time I went to school in Beijing, how to write the plot after traveling so far? All original? The second time you were admitted to Peking University, did you develop your career in the entertainment industry? I don't even know what to say. This is a period drama.

I felt okay after reading some of the first parts, but all the rest were ordinary family matters. It's the same as having system plug-ins, but I don't see any effect. Later, the old man and the old woman were drugged to give birth to a child. Originally, they wanted to give birth to a boy to torment the people in the old house, but it was better to torture the other person. As a result, the author insists on writing about a female baby, and the result is that a newly born little girl commits various crimes, which is disgusting to watch, but the protagonist does not feel any guilt at all. If it were a boy, the protagonist's grandparents and the second uncle's family would definitely be in conflict with each other, and the protagonist's grandparents would definitely not let the child suffer because they favored sons over daughters, and they could take revenge without involving the child. Moreover, it doesn't depend on the author's intention to have a boy or a girl, the author insists on putting some poison.

The author arranged to have a daughter! Is your heart dark? How would you arrange to have a boy?

I feel that I have dug a hole for myself. The child will not be taken back by Zhuang Chaoying to be raised in the end, or it will be raised to death by the people in the old house. I feel that letting the old lady get pregnant can only harm others and myself, and even harm an innocent life.

Booked to chapter 70, it's not worth it. It's all about the old house's nonsense, the counterattack is painless, and a little aunt is brought in. The plot is more exciting than the TV series.

I don't want the heroine to have Wu Shanshan

After reading them all, I concluded that the writing was okay, but there is a problem. The short plot of the author's description of parents is too long, and the main plot of the main character is too small. Some of the interesting points that should be there, such as study, such as royalties, are all in a kind of way. It is skipped in a very subtle way, and it feels like you will mention what the protagonist did after the fact. The climax and climax in the middle are simply missing, or not written. This kind of writing makes me a little confused, and I feel that the author can't tell what the readers like to see.

The main character's wife should be Wu Shanshan, right?

Back in this era, do you want to help the country rise in science and technology? If there is no black technology in the system, your book will not last long.

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