A Rat in Yellow Wind Ridge: I Rise by Plundering Traits

I feel like this book is held back a bit by the main character's identity. The rat-like character is really unpleasant. The image of this race is too bad. If you write about a slightly more normal and good-looking race, the look and feel will be much better. . . In the latest chapter, it is written that the protagonist has been spread rumors, and his psychological thought is that he cares about his image and public opinion, and is afraid of being blackmailed. If this is the case, why not change his body? With a rat's head, no matter how good you are, when others see you, their first reaction will be that of a monster, not a god, right? The gods in heaven have names and surnames, and they have high status. Most of them are in human form and appear in the form of animals. They don't look like high-status gods. One more thing, since it is certain that there will be a female protagonist, why are you so stubborn all the time? **And beauty? Even if you are a **, you are a mighty and domineering person, but you are a rat. . .

If a mouse adds wings, isn't it a bat?

As far as the website Feilu is concerned, the audience for multiple female protagonists is definitely larger than that for single female protagonists and no female protagonists. Although your book does not explicitly write about emotional drama, looking at the whole book, it would be better to have more female protagonists, because just for the characters who appear, Ao Li and Taiyin, if you don't write one of them as the female protagonist, send the girl or hide in the gods, there will definitely be people in the future who will complain, and even persuade or withdraw readers. , There is also Chang'e. I am actually quite confused about this character because I have never had any formal contact with the protagonist until now, and I don't know whether the Chang'e in your profile refers to the one who stole Houyi's elixir of immortality, or the one who is related to Zhu Bajie, or is it directly Taiyin? Originally, when Taiyin appeared earlier, I thought Taiyin and Chang'e were two in one, but later in the plot of Houyi Gong, another Heng'e was introduced. Taiyin had a conversation with Heng'e, so it was obviously not the same person. So you have to pay attention, and you still need to get the heroine who is clearly hinted in the introduction.

To be honest, the main character's race, rats, is really not very good. Even if he becomes a saint, he will still be called a rat by other saints. Even if he is strong enough to kill saints, he will still be praised by people. The most important thing is that there is no way to refute.

The writing gives people a feeling of being both happy and unhappy. The protagonist is shackled too much, and it's a bit abstract to have so many colorful entries.

The introduction is just a joke. The protagonists in the plot are weak, and they are still from the Devouring Evolution School. The author also likes to arrange enemies for the protagonist that cannot be defeated. Will he play Miracle or Gattaca every day? It's hard to write Black Monkey. How do you change the plot???

The book is very beautiful, a rare good book. It was the fact that the main character was a rat that made me a little nervous. No matter how tall this race is, I feel like they can't be associated with being handsome, and they have almost no character. There are so many mythological colleagues. Although the Dragon Clan has been badly written, they are indeed handsome, with both mystery and majesty. The Snake Clan is also good. You can lean on the Dragon Clan and turn into a dragon, or you can go to higher-end sublimation. For example, those ancient gods with human heads and snake bodies, Zhulong, Nuwa, Fuxi, and Pangu all have the appearance of human heads and snake bodies. They take the high-end route and the upper limit is very high. Even if you don't choose these two starts, there are still a lot of birds and animals to choose from. Birds can be sublimated in the direction of Fei Lu, Suzaku, Kunpeng, Golden Crow, etc. Among animals, Xie Zhi, Baize, Qilin, White Tiger and the like are also good. Even if you want to write about some common races, such as ox, tiger, lion, fox, etc. It's this rat. The style of painting is a bit strange. Think about the future where the protagonist is in a high position, but it's a rat. Well, it's weird.

By abusing golden fingers and adding entries to the demon clan under his command on a large scale, is he really treating everyone as a fool? Especially knowing that powerful powers such as Taibai Jinxing are lurking inside, who wouldn't covet such a heaven-defying method? The author also said in the book that the protagonist, a little ant, did something that even Daluo couldn't do. It was really a fool's errand and a reckless man!

If that doesn't work, just change the race. Rats really don't look good. It is also common to be called a rat.

The writing is really good, but the rat-like image of the male protagonist is like the fried durian meat with mango mooncakes. I don't hate it because the writing is really good, but I can't say I like it. Normal people hate the Three Pests. They don't hate the Yellow Wind Monkey King just because they admire his feats. But in black mythology, it is really an enlarged rat. When I thought about the male protagonist reaching the top in the future, others introduced: This is the great emperor of the rat clan who is the co-owner of the three realms. Are the rats in charge? Very dramatic. I also thought about the heroine and the male protagonist with the rat head kissing each other. I couldn't imagine whether they were kissing on the teeth or somewhere else.