Hogwarts: I'm The Chosen One, and I'm Breaking Up Couples Left and Right!

Inexplicable feelings for the Potters and Harry Potter. If it is fair to say that he has feelings for Lily, after all, the protagonist did witness her saving his life with his own eyes, so it is fair to say that he has some feelings for her. Where does the protagonist's affection for that cheap dad and cheap brother come from? I can't even tell if I'm pretending or if I really have feelings. They're not buddies. The protagonist had no shortage of love in his previous life, and he was also taken care of by Hermione's father in this life. Why does he have some kind of affection for these two people inexplicably?

Brotherhood is so annoying that even though you want to automatically ignore it, you spend the entire chapter saying that only a blind person can ignore brotherhood. Most readers don't like the fact that the protagonist keeps trying to please Harry. Brotherhood is a poisonous point because the protagonist often has to consider other people, and gives free benefits to others without seeing anything in return. So don't say that changing the outline will make the whole story collapse. If you don't change the outline, there will be no readers who want to continue reading, let alone making money.

To be honest, it was the first time I saw the succubus system causing a break. Even the earliest version of the Japanese gentle personality would not have such a thing as a break.

After reading it, I felt like the time traveler protagonist lacked love. A time-traveler with complete cognition has no emotional basis at all, and then he meets Harry and directly engages in a brother-in-law relationship. If you say that the protagonist is an aboriginal who had a hard time as a child and longs for family love, it would be fair to say, but the protagonist is a time-traveler with complete cognition. After time-traveling, he has been living very well from kindergarten to now, even not averagely well. I really can't understand why you are so eager for family affection under such circumstances.

So at the beginning, you are saying that the protagonist was thrown out of the house because of a big melon bite, and then when Dumbledore came, he only took Harry away from the house without even looking at the outside, so the protagonist was sent to an orphanage? Author, are you serious? Do you really think it's reasonable?

In what age are you still writing about a plot like a breakup?

I feel like a pig's foot is licking someone else

Why did it become a nanny article? Just bite the bullet and wipe the butt. An adult is playing house with an 11-year-old child?

It's so poisonous, so many beauties break up just by breaking up

If the male protagonist is not so emotional, you can still take a look. What I mean by emotional is that he will feel sad for his parents who have never even met. Brother, they have never raised you. Even if you are a time traveler with more than ten or twenty years of life experience, you are still playing brotherly love with Harry. I don't know what to say.