
American Comics: A Time Criminal from the Start, Stealing Traits Like Crazy
美漫:开局时间犯,疯狂掠夺词条
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- Ongoing
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- 1.3M Words
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- Fanfiction
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- Film & TV Fanfiction
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- 9h ago
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- Faloo
Synopsis
All-time: Reads, Flowers.
935Chapters
16.2MReads
58kFlowers
9.9Score
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No, buddy, I really can't accept your explanation. Brother, I really don't want to quarrel with you. Think about how long it takes for you to throw a punch. It only takes two seconds to accumulate power, right? The main thing I can't accept is that the protagonist gets close and then punches in one second. The protagonist has suffered so much and made so many calculations. On paper, the strength you wrote is still too strong. It takes half a day to defeat a Kraken with a pure expansion fee of nothing. You also said that it takes ten seconds to fully activate the combat power. I suddenly felt that the protagonist does not have to endure the hardship, but it still costs nothing.
Obviously you are the only one who writes original stories. The original plots these days are watery and boring, and the protagonist's character is a bit crooked. Let's honestly write and participate in the original plot, even if it's a comic plot.
If you want to be original, you might as well use the plot of a comic, but writing it with the strength of a movie is better than the industrial ** you are writing now.
Not a buddy? Don't you have Spider-Man's super powers? Add in the terminal virus and the super serum, not to mention fifty tons per punch, and then add twenty-five to it, after all, you have to have thirty tons, right? Fighting a Kraken back and forth?????? Not a buddy???? Isn't the word count so watery?? Man, I feel so sad when I see it. I feel uncomfortable all over. To be honest, if this was a subscription chapter, I would have already spoken out.
That's awesome. What is Chapter 86 about? Mystique is really going to be acquired, isn't it? Do you really think there is a market for women with no bottom line like Fei Luli? Mystique is going to be the protagonist, who cares if it's her first time? Who cares whether Sha can kill the protagonist? Mystique is fine when I think about it, but the problem is that she takes action and takes action. After completing the protagonist's plan, she becomes a poem.
I'm so tired. I'm playing house here. I'm outputting one by one on the protagonist's face. The protagonist still finds it interesting. Are you a **? Is this plot interesting? What's the point? Does anyone like to watch it? Hurry up and end this ** plot. It's grinding.
The protagonist in the latest chapters has become mentally retarded. Just lick women like that? His personality has changed like that
Hey, it's not better than some of the adult books that make adults roll their eyes at the beginning. Why do I feel like these adult books are all written in batches. . .
So many novels support me, saying that it's okay to preach and receive fluids, but it's not okay for me to stick to you through my clothes. The next chapter will be late...
I feel like the attributes after Awakening of Divine Power were not written well, they are too ordinary.