Anime Crossover: Drawing Makes Me Stronger, Ultra Instinct from the Start

Let me ask a question. The identity of the protagonist is set as the helm of a chaebol, and the house is a small house. You said it was for the sake of warmth. I believe you. Why do you take the tram when you don't even have a car to get out of school? Are you saying that because of age, you can't afford a driver?

To be honest, the combat power system is a bit flawed. As far as the protagonist's expressiveness is concerned, you say it's okay for him to blow up a city, but when it comes to blowing up a few universes, in terms of the size of the universe, isn't it just a thought to kill whoever wants to die? And has Gojo Satoru's combat power increased? Doesn't S-level need to explode the city? Finally, since the protagonist has protected a city, he shouldn't hide in hiding. That's what a rat would do. He directly declares ownership of the city. Does the Godslayer know? I have always felt that if you are invincible, you should follow the king's path, and if you are weak, you should follow the humble path. If you are invincible, you should follow the *path (no typo)** and you will realize it for yourself.

I tested it, and the main character was written so well. But Saitama didn't dare to fight when he was bald. Then why did you brag about it so much in the early stage, Fukai?

The battle power has collapsed. The protagonist who is invincible and whose energy can crush the universe cannot easily defeat Gojou Satoru. The two people are written to be incomparable in strength. Chapter 66 must be changed, otherwise it will turn off many readers.

All the poisonous points in Feilu's novels: self-love, giving away girls, molesting women, clones, changing women, amnesia, gathering CP, cross-dressing, remarrying, lily, the male protagonist is weak and is too young to be a young virgin, dressing up as a pure man, gender change, soul penetration, the Virgin, the sadistic protagonist giving benefits to passers-by, etc., Plots and poisonous points, as well as the characters

How about deleting Qiong? Even if the main palace is Yuki, what you wrote is so funny that the two of them together end up not giving any description at all? They are all flirting with the other one. Then why did you write this? What's the use of the word number besides water? It feels like it's not even as good as a quilt

The author doesn't know if you've seen the Spells of Return Gojo Satori and how it is possible that Gojo Satori is cut in half into 2.5 Pieces and is as strong as an S-class hero. He is considered a B-level hero at most.

The plot of the author Tram is outdated. It is not much different from the side projects ten years ago. I wonder if you know the author of the previous plan for the Millennium Journey game. He wrote the kind of **-dimensional plot and was directly criticized for replacing the character. What is a **-dimensional plot? For example, the female character goes to work in a maid cafe. The boss is an uncle, and most of the customers are uncles. There are other plots where the female character has an engagement, and the protagonist goes to get married. These are all **-dimensional plots. What else is there? Female characters give benefits to passers-by. Passers-by see the shy expression of the female character, the shameful expression of the female character, the female character swimsuit, sailor suit, black and white silk, uniform, and cosplay. These are all *-dimensional plots. There are lily attributes in the harem and so on. It is outdated. More than ten years ago, everyone could accept it. Now with a bunch of authors and works plus a bunch of game plots, these *-dimensional plots are simply thunderous.

The author of the divine novel, the comment section is full of criticism, but the content is still stubborn. The standard fighting process, if you don't change it, you will have to send it sooner or later.

The combat power system is indeed flawed. Anyone can defeat the protagonist. Although each of them can be solved within two chapters, a bunch of things that are instantly killed can be solved in one sentence. As a result, it can only be written in one chapter. It is very annoying to have too many characters. Also, I don't know what the meaning of the arrangement is in the clepsydra section. Su Nuo's finger was given, but the invading curse spirit Clepsydra ran away. Can you treat Hongyue City as your own private property? If he comes to your territory to cause trouble, he should be crushed to ashes, right? And it was because he was fighting with Gojo Satoru that he didn't notice and let him run away. Didn't pay attention? Is this a word that should be used for a guy with cosmic-level energy?