A Hyperdimensional Anime Crossover That Begins With Warhammer

It's too weak, and the protagonist is too flimsy. Since the protagonist is directly connected to the emperor, why not first give him a makeover as part of the Imperial Guard? With Imperial Guard status, his strength and position would be guaranteed, and he wouldn't be targeted by some lowly approval officials.

It feels like a self-indulgent story. The first few chapters were very padded, with too many shifts in perspective, making it tiring to read. I don't know what the protagonist is trying to do, and there's no main plot. Let's skip to the back and see. If it's still the same as the front, then forget about it.

It was incredibly frustrating to watch. It felt like the protagonist was playing PUBG, constantly on the verge of dying. He was so weak.

It seems some women are so clueless, like they can't even tell the difference between king and queen. Yuriko Takagi is like that, and so is Kongou. They demand the male protagonist prove his superiority with that smug, self-righteous smirk… Where does their confidence come from?

In the Warhammer universe, 99% of strange occurrences are Tzeentch's fault. The protagonist is also incredibly eccentric; he wouldn't dare to casually believe chatbots in Warhammer.

The sensory experience from another person's perspective is extremely poor; the plot is dragging, repetitive, and somewhat padded. I know you're worried about people who don't know the author making assumptions, but if you've read your book, it means you either play the hammer or are familiar with it. Otherwise, in the FL Studio community, nobody likes this kind of oppressive atmosphere; everyone prefers mindless, enjoyable gameplay.

It was exhausting to watch; the plot flowed poorly, and some parts came out of nowhere.

It's incredibly bloated. Not only does it copy and paste every single setting from Warhammer, but it also reiterates the world-building and various settings for every character who appears. The problem isn't just a brief overview; it's incredibly superficial. Often, an entire chapter is filled with copied and pasted settings without the main character ever appearing. More than half of it is just copied and pasted information. It's utterly ridiculous and a complete waste of money.

Writing Warhammer is like walking a tightrope. It's a niche genre, not only is it hard to make money, but you're also prone to being sued. As soon as the book is published, you'll face lawsuits and have to give back all the money you've earned.

Was your Chaos Space Marine Prototype? How come it's so much stronger than a regular Space Marine?