
Honkai: Star Rail: The Script Is Exposed, and Elio Completely Loses It
崩铁:曝光剧本,艾利欧破防了
- Status
- Ongoing
- Length
- 1.1M Words
- Genre
- Sci-Fi & Gaming
- Subgenre
- Virtual MMORPG
- Updated
- 12d ago
- Source
- Faloo
Stats
All-time: Reads, Flowers.
827Chapters
15.5MReads
508.1kMonthly reads
16kFlowers
10.0Score
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If you write fan fiction, you should read the plot carefully. If you don't read the plot, you will write randomly. The left brain elbows the right brain. The brain is not fully developed and the cerebellum is not developed at all. For an author like you, I think you should be thrown onto the Cosplay stage, pretending to be a war criminal wearing a prison uniform and tied with a rope, kneeling on the stage with a board on your back, and write "I'm guilty" next to it, so that the people below who play the role of MiHoYo will criticize and criticize you. Let them know what you look like and who you are, a person who writes random plots and content. You wrote a novel without sufficient preparation of materials. What novel are you writing? ! If that doesn't work, go to a female channel and write their novel about "I can divorce you first and split half of my cultivation." I feel like you can become very popular this way.
The first part is exactly the same as the original work, but the first point of change is to let Cocolia survive. As a leader, Cocolia betrayed everyone and killed a lot of people. What reason did she have to survive? Just because she is pretty and popular? For this little traffic, to whitewash this kind of role, you make me feel**
Are you coming to Wushang to fight Huanhu too? Let me tell you, except for Jing Yuan, who is the same envoy, the other three Huanhu are not looked down upon.
Damn it, what does it have to do with storytelling?
I read a few pictures and they all mentioned that the star first received the attention of destruction and then the attention of preservation. Shouldn't it be shocking that a person who has the attention of two star gods can have two fates? Why do everyone think this is so rare?
One is in operation, the identification is completed, and the plot is very watery.
Huang Quan is so destructive that I can't even look at it at all.
Author, the storytelling you added is too awkward. Storytelling should be done properly. For example, the moment a star is born, there should be a line about the birth of the Galaxy Bat Man. Your writing is too awkward and does not fit in with the plot at all.
Bai Lu was appointed by Dan Feng before he was executed as Tuilin, and Yun Wu and others knew about it. .
Your exposure was done on a mobile phone. It's not like other exposures where the sky appears and everyone can see it. This is a bit weird. Those who are blind can't see it at all. It can only be seen by some people but not everyone. Since some people can't see it, it can't be considered exposure. Your exposure is unlike any other exposure that treats people like all things are equal. The treatment is unfair to people with different positions, which makes some people invisible. A typical example is that Luofu in the book can use these to deal with the round-up of Medicine King's Secret. Blind people like Danshu cannot see these, which leads to great inequality between the two sides. Since you have been exposed in this way, you should treat everyone equally. You should not be biased by Luofu, and you should not discriminate against Medicine King's Secret. As a result, the balance between the Merciful Medicine King and the Demon Gong Ancestor followers was broken.